Reviews for A Tale of Life and Death, Mostly Death
qirien chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Favorite line: "my lack of flesh-eating tendencies had given me away". :-) Nice intro!
XepherFlame chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
A very well done chapter. The action is portrayed nicely, the details are plentiful, and it follows the story to the letter.

I would say that you should try dividing the longer paragraphs. Not that there's anything wrong with your method, but it can be a sore thing to look at when it's jumbled with character dialogue. Not only that, maybe try to give your character a little more emphasis on his personality; The only hint was that one line of dialogue he says at the end.

But the good of your writing outweights the bad, so keep on doing what you're doing.