Reviews for At Your Service
Readerjkr chapter 5 . 2/18/2012
Read this piece on LJ and it's one of the best HP ff stories I've read. Amazing characters, consistent original theory of magic, great adventure, believable dialogue and some good physical action. I hope to see a new story from you soon.
ishala8 chapter 5 . 2/17/2012
I don't know why, considering this fic made for an extremely stressful and emotional read, but I loved it! Thank you for all your hard work; you produced an amazing fic.
Inkosdelirium chapter 5 . 2/13/2012
This is 1,000,000 reviews from me. WOW what an amazing story. I had to read it all as quick as I could, I annoyed my whole family by hogging the computer for a couple of hours t read this twice! AMAZING! You're own magic theory, a new amazing plot, great (M) scenes. And real emotion I love this story!

I'm going to find my password for my account again and add you to my favorites because WOW!
BiggestFan chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
I can't believe how little the reviews are for this fanfic. I had to read this entire (very long, mind you) fanfic in one sitting. I couldn't bring myself to stop!

It was such a riveting story, and I could not predict the plot at all. It was so well written that I'm positive even J.K. Rowling would have be awed at how well you kept the characters in character.

Please keep up your great work. :)
paramoreeloverr chapter 5 . 2/12/2012
This was truly a great story. And im glad to have read it. The way you wrote things had me hooked from the beginning. I'm happy to say this became a favorite of mine very quickly. Good job ob such a great story! :)
MarquisOfSham chapter 5 . 2/12/2012
This was an utterly spectacular piece - I loved it so much. You are such a talented writer!
LaSuen chapter 5 . 2/8/2012
Absolutely loved it! Thank you so much for writing this! I admire your stylistic skills, the text flows so smoothly you just can't stop reading :)
taraslashreading chapter 5 . 2/2/2012
Wow! This was a great story, with an actual quality mystery plot (adds to favorites). Thanks for sharing it for free, I've paid for stories that weren't nearly as good;)
Rimsha chapter 5 . 2/1/2012
I lost a ton of sleep reading this, but so utterly worth it. This was absolutely fantastic and I loved it! Thank you so much!
disappoint.me chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
Brilliant. It leaves me not only a satisfied reader but hopeful as well. See, i'm very new to HP fanfiction and after a handfull of failed attempts to find a good fic i was growing quite aprehensive. But your story is great! It has everything from mistery to humour and of course romance. Harry and Draco's romantic relationship is still a bit of a challenge for my imagination (even if it can't seem to pair Malfoy with anybody else and he's too big of a charmer to be left out!). You made it terribly believable, though, like the canon was hinting at that all the way. Alright, i might be exagerating here but not on the fact that your story is superb! Thank you so much for writing it.
DeadAgain chapter 5 . 1/29/2012
A wonderfull idea excelently executed!...just Wow I loved! I liked how you not only told a story about Harry and Draco but alos included many suporting charcters like Lavender or Perterson! Kepp going...you know it would be cool if Harry and Lavender end up as Auror Partners (friends only)...just thinking...very aloud...to myself
Empress of Fools chapter 5 . 1/29/2012
N'awwwww, they're so damn cute xxx Thanks for the fic, it was brilliant :D
TheFlynnEffect chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
I can't even begin to express how strong this story is overall. First, your style of writing resembles JKR's a lot. It feels like you've put together a recreation of the feeling of Hogwarts and school from the first 4 books, plus the mystery and intrigue of the last 3, especially the seventh. The characters are amazingly in character for the plot. The bickering between Harry, Ron, and Hermione made me strangely nostalgic, remembering the trio throwing around theories in the sixth book. Speaking of the sixth, the references to Harry's little Draco obsession were great. Second, your own plot ideas and style really completed it. All of the little things building up to that "aha!" moment were intrinsically genius. And that moment itself, the moment when Harry started to realize what was going on, this powerful feeling came over me. It was like a flash of realization, when I pieced every detail together, but also a chilling sensation. Nothing I've ever read has resonated with me like that. This review really doesn't do your story justice; I'm sure there are a lot of other things I didn't mention that I noticed while reading. Now I'm off to go look at some of your other stuff!
Wyny chapter 5 . 1/28/2012
I'm a bit in love with your story.

I really spent all the reading wondering what was happening, trying to find explaination for many things and when the answer came I was even more impressed.

I love your way with words and the wonderful ideas you have.

Thanks for posting!
OakStone730 chapter 4 . 1/28/2012
URGH! What is up with Draco? Possession? Peeves possessed? I love so much about this story. Really like your Harry and Draco, and the switch from stalking to snogging. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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