Reviews for paint me a picture
fabricated fantasies chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
Gosh, this was so gorgeous, Rachel! Honestly, the scenario you painted with your words was just absolutely beautiful - their relationship seemed to simple and easy. It's easy to take the complicated route when doing crossgen, and I'm so glad you didn't do that! I love this glimpse into their happiness, and you've created such chemistry between them.

A few things: in this line ('he's grinning goofy') the last word should probably be 'goofily', not 'goofy'. And in this one ('"Do you like it?" She asks'), 'She' should be lowercase.

Other than those few technicalities, this was beautiful, and you did such an amazing job! ]
somethingwentBUMP chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
asdfghjkl. this is just amazing, i really love it. the imagery is so powerful. brilliant.
keep my issues drawn chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
I really liked this, I loved how you fit the prompts in, and the way you wrote it. beautiful job!
BlueEyes444 chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
This was perfect. :D Seriously. I'm shipping them even more then I did now. The pairing is adorable and I love it a lot. :D One of my favorite pieces by you. :D