|Reviews for Everything Means Nothing|
| haliad chapter 6 . 9/13/2012
Well I like that she seems to fit in with the LoDT world. Whenever she has a line of dialogue it doesn't stick out or make her seem Mary Sueish.
However, there are a few things that don't make sense to me in the fic. There's no mention of Peggy, has Heather replaced her? And why wouldn't she be offended at Skip's line "boys kicking girls also"? I understand if she wouldn't care, but a few other lines in this fic gave me the impression that she hates her own gender. If she had the same score as Tony and Stacy, shouldn't the official warn her immediately (like they did for the boys), why did the wait for the announcements?
Now all of those things above can probably be explained away, but the reaction to her dad's death was imo unrealistic. Her dad recently died and she decides to hang out with her pals and pretend nothing is wrong? And why hasn't she told them?
Anyway, that's just a bunch of nitpicks I have, otherwise I'm interested to know what happens next (especially interested in seeing how her father's death will impact her storyline).
| 2LostSouls chapter 5 . 8/26/2012
I actually can't believe there's a dogtown fanfic so recent! Please keep on writing so there's something new to read. Loving your writing so far, I'm looking forward to you straying away from the movies storyline, and extending the your own plot :)
| NikkiReedfan chapter 6 . 2/9/2012
I liked chapter 6 and I dont think you were rusty at all :)
| NikkiReedfan chapter 5 . 1/18/2012
For Heathers dad to die and you not knowing if it has something to do with the plot and your not sure if it does...or you probs just don't wanna give out to much informationn with this brilliant story lol XD
| NikkiReedfan chapter 4 . 1/17/2012
nawww take your time updating as long as we get an update we are cool lol XD
| NikkiReedfan chapter 3 . 1/17/2012
thanks fir that end note and even if nobody is reviewing keep updating :). I was excited when I saw what was gonna happen in this chapter i love this scene I you did it justice :) update soon
| NikkiReedfan chapter 2 . 1/16/2012
I loved this chapter I didn't want it to end the only thing I saw wrong (and its not that big of a mistake) was at the very beginning when you said may 1974 and last chapter was 1975. I hope you put in the part where jay mocks skip about the t shirts thats one of my favourite parts in the movie that scene :) looking forward to the next chapter
| VioletMorningstar chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
I like it though ive never seen the movie I still enjoyed the story
| NikkiReedfan chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
i like it so far :) you might not get a lot of reviews cuz it seems like the last update for a story hasn't been for a while but don't let thst bring you down. and just to let you know i usually don't review more than once but i'm going to try to review alot for this story but if i don't i'm just leting you know that i'm going to be reading every chapter :) ok i'm gonna stop rambling now so please update soon. :D