Reviews for Three Brothers, Seven Guardians
Guest chapter 11 . 11/4/2013
Listen, this was really good I love it! But that enders game thing you did gave me an idea. What if ender had a twin sister they were the third instead of just ender. She was a selective mute though and would only talk like her real self with ender. She was as smart as ender and would point out his mistakes in tactics. Then Ender is thinking over bonzo's coma and she comes in. But ender is emotionally unstable and is like your useless and she becomes a shell of herself. She deletes all of her invention plans or something of value to her on her moniter. Then I dont know your Choice. But I was thinking and the more I thought the more it unraveled can you pleeeaase write this story. I cant have an account on fanfiction because my stupid laptop freezes when I go on. Sorry for spelling im typing on my smartphone
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 11 . 10/30/2013
Epic rescue.

Also, how can Roderich be both a pimp and dorky?
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 10 . 7/26/2013
Poor Gilbert. Get better soon!
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 9 . 1/8/2013
Well, that break-in could've been worse. Remember the time Blair walked in on Heathcliffe in the shower in "Game of Thrones: The Modern Re-Telling"? XD
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 8 . 8/6/2012
Roderich, now I can see why you started that mafia safe house in "Game of Thrones: The Modern Re-Telling" - You hit on Natalia when she was married to Ivan. XD
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 7 . 7/27/2012
Ivan's house has everything. I bet he has a lot of rare artifacts, like his water pipe, a Nirvash, the Iron Throne, Seneca Crane's beard in a pickling jar, and even the Going Merry.
Cirydae chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Hey, this story is rather entertaining-definitely a good plot idea so far. You might want to work on describing things, though, right now the writing is more dialogue than anything else and to me it reads like a script.

It's really interesting the way it is, though! Keep up the good work!
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 6 . 5/21/2012
Dr. Facilier is putting people out of work. I bet that somewhere in New Orleans, a voodoo priest name "Matthieu Williams" is crying. (Or Professor Stein, Ageha, Shinra, Dr. Aurelius, or Chopper)
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 5 . 5/3/2012
Yes! The Straw Hats are free pirates!
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 4 . 4/1/2012
That voyage was fun!

We are in New York now! Yosh!
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 3 . 3/20/2012
What a productive voyage. XD

Oooh! Blair is cheating on Soul!

Oh, no! I hope the Straw Hats find the awesome Prussia soon!
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 2 . 1/21/2012
Hey! Roderich's supposed to be pimping, not geeky! XD
Oxenstierna D. Yuki-Rin chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
"LuLu and GilGil"?

Silly Aelita, those are their names. XD

Run, Beilschmidts, run! Don't kill the pimp!