|Reviews for The Other Side of the Heart|
| Flipnoteriversong chapter 28 . 3/8
You made me fall in love with this story, and then my heart broke. I just kept reading the first sentence in the previous chapter over and over, like it wasn't real. You made a really amazing story. I loved the story, now excuse me, I have to ask my mom to go buy a tub of peanut butter so I can eat it with a spoon while listening to music from the Phantom of the Opera. Your writing is very good. I am going to see what else you wrote, since I spent all my time reading this story just now. Your writing is very good, and I don't normally tell people who's writing I liked that. You made me cry, laugh, smile, frown, and I enjoyed this story. I just think you deserved to see that your story is liked. :) 3
| nyehpeasents chapter 28 . 1/11
Wow, this just.. completely ripped my heart out. But it was absolutely beautiful. Amazing work. I'm now going to go hide and cry for about a millennium or two.
| Ace of Hearts chapter 28 . 1/2
I hate you for making such a beautiful piece of writing. Not really, but I have been sobbing my eyes out the last however many chapters and the way you write is so excruciatingly and painfully amazing that I can feel it in my heart.
Thank you for putting all of my feelings into words.
| Katt Pawson chapter 28 . 12/26/2013
Out of all the sad stories I've read, never had one made me cry so much. Beautiful written as it was, my heart is literally breaking right now. I was definitely not expecting that horrible ending. So beautiful and terrible. It makes me want to scream and erase reading this story from my memory. It makes me want to reread it all over and over. Beautifully tragic.
| Guest chapter 26 . 12/21/2013
wow. ok. no.
you need to tag shit like major character death. It is s very uncool that it wasnt tagged.
Like, no. OK, my mom has a heart condition like this, shes pale, and she gets dizzy walking up the stairs and shes had 16 surgeries in her life. Could you fucking warn your readers, please? Like, thanks for giving me the idea that she could randomly die one day in the snow. Now, fine, whatever. You had no way of knowing any of your readers would be able to relate to this story in that way, fine. But Ive been crying over his death for 2 hours, I really didnt need this, I wanted to read something uplifting, like my OTP being cute.
Just. Tag. It. Tag the major character death.
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/16/2013
man, I hate gamzee. I do. But Im also a vegetarian and that was a scene I know all too well my friend. Well done.
(The other day my sister got me to take a bite of her bun then proudly stated "it has bacon in it!" so I immediately spat it out and she looked horrified. She had forgotten. I havent eaten meat in over a year... )
So yes, I love that gamzee is a vegetarian, thanks man.
| ChellaC chapter 28 . 12/9/2013
Wow this was really amazing, I was laughing & tearing up through this whole thing! Your writing is lovely & the characterization was fantastic. (I absolutely adore Karkat in this.) You had me attached to these characters from page one, & I was cheering all of them on through the whole story! You did such a great job of conveying emotion, it was joyful & heartbreaking & you could just feel all the embarrassment of some moments alongside them, haha! Thanks so much for this great story!
| DealingDarjeeling chapter 28 . 11/27/2013
Who do you think you are, running round leaving scars, collecting your jar of hearts, tearing feels apart ...
I am in a glass case of emotion.
| xxShonaNinjaxx chapter 28 . 11/3/2013
this is one of the best fanfictions i have ever read. it made me cry. i swear, i never thought i could love a story that rips my otp in half, but i did. you, sir, are amazing.
| xxShonaNinjaxx chapter 27 . 10/31/2013
i think i just died a little inside... T-T
| RaawrImaDinosaur chapter 28 . 10/29/2013
OMG WHYY?! You had me crying to my friend, going "NO ANGST! NO ANGST SO IT ISN'T TRUE!" Oh gosh, I am so close to being a sobbing mess right now. Eridan's death was so sudden, and unexpected - I mean, you'd think it'd be a given with his heart problem, but everything as going so well! AHH!
Ah well, this was a brilliant story all the same (although I wish it did end differently. Oh well). Great job :)
| Spritefyre chapter 28 . 10/5/2013
I dont normally read erisol fanfics, but I am really glad I did for this one. You made my laugh and cry with your words and for that, I thank you. I love how you portrayed Eridan, his douchebaggery and his jackassery and made them into a character that had a storyline and I could see his pain. I really enjoyed the fact that there was no visible mistake. Thanks so much for writing this gem.
| FanficFinatic2 chapter 28 . 9/25/2013
I hate how he was never able to give either of them the gift he got them. I just knew as soon as he bought Eridans present that he wasn't going t be able to give it to him...just like with Aradia in the beginning...I knew once his condition was mentioned something was going to happen. It still didn't help keep the tears away though I cried for the last three chapters. I'm glad that he keeps his ring as a reminder of him this is just so bittersweet... the ending was perfect. You're an amazing writer and I'm glad I found this story even though I balled my eyes out.
| FanficFinatic2 chapter 27 . 9/25/2013
Now he has a piece of her and a piece of him...never to forget...but to remember.
| FanficFinatic2 chapter 26 . 9/25/2013
As soon as I read the very first sentence I started crying and it didn't stop at all. I had to wipe my tears away and keep turning back trying to read through my blurry vision. How did I know he was going to end up dying? God this is just so bittersweet.