|Reviews for A New Platoon|
| The Final Conduit chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
Good work... however, and I'm sure you noticed this as well... but you seen to have a habit of putting sentences on lines in the middle of your sentences. As this happened throughout the entire chapter, I'm not sure if you did it on purpose or not.
Just wanted to tell you.
| Diggs121 chapter 2 . 3/13/2012
keep up the good work