Thought to leave rev rev for the marquis. Schooling might be a pain, but consider escaping back to this story next. Just add a side character that represents the characteristics you dislike the most in your students and let misfortune befall them.

The normal bunshin jutsu isn't capable of doing any damage since they're just illusions so I'm very confused with the fight with Mizuki. If he's using elemental bunshin then maybe it would make sense but they clearly couldn't be touched so they shouldn't be able to touch others either.

Holy shit bro you did a really good job. I started reading this a couple days ago and haven't really stopped. Honestly fanfics that incorporate naruto's clan I think this is the best one I've read. Good luck on future chapters I can't wait

3 very attentive jonin sensei, 8 other teammates as friends who help Naurto with sparring and training. A whole powerful clan that claimed him as clan head and yet you created a Naruto that is weaker and more pathetic than the Canon Naruto.

Good chapter

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note: If you are writing Author Notes on your 1st chapter already listing things ppl cant complain about later then don't complain that p'pl are complaining either.

After reading you AN

Alguna Vez seguirás esta historia? / Will you ever follow this story?

Such a shame you stopped this fic. I really like it.

While I feel bad for Hinata, I'm hoping for a InoxNaruto ship in this.

"Absolutely zero stealth skills" Other than being able to paint a mountain without anyone noticing until he was done and evade and sneak past squads of adult ninja as well as infiltrate the most defended location in the village and steal one of it's most important artifacts literally under the Hokage's nose.

But yeah, other than that, he totally has "absolutely zero stealth skills". Cool story, bro.

Yeah, it's hard for them to confirm that he's an Uzumaki. I mean, they have the genetic test proving he's an Uzumaki, but other than the absolute proof that he is one, how would they be able to know? And yes, I'm being brutally sarcastic at the idea they have any need for more evidence. Heck, there isn't really more evidence anyway. What would they tell their leaders? "Sorry, we can't confirm that he's one of us, all we have is this absolute proof that he's one of us from genetic testing." Don't be stupid.

Them not going straight to Konoha, their eternal ally, after the fall of Uzu is what's really weird. Almost as weird as Nagato and his family living in a village that had helped destroy their clan or Karin being in Grass and that the only way for any Uzumaki survivor to get anywhere was to go through the Land of Fire yet they didn't simply go to Konoha. Kishimoto has a horrible habit of just making stuff up as he goes without regard to any consequences.

Nah, fam, this story needs an update. I am hooked, how you finna make a beast asf story and then leave it unfinished for years. Nah, bruh, update, please

So I’m guessing that this story is dead since it hasn’t been updated in years

Really really hoping to see an update someday!