well I don't know if ur gonna finish this or not it's been quite a while but this chapter made me cry and that doesn't happen often please finish I really want to know who and why. but otherwise love the story and your fleshed out oc characters

THIS IS ABSOLUTELY FUCKING GOLD!

Very well written and a lot of character development, which I love. Would have loved to read it to the end. Maybe I will check out his original fiction

Go and write fairy tail dam shit wtf is natsu and stripper doing here.

Danzo ! I really enjoyed reading this story..

Poxa pena do velho

damn bro i am in tears can u write this one?

It's such a pity that this story has been discontinued, you have created a magnificent AU here and even unfinished it's one of the best fanfictions I have ever read

What a great and original sorry. I'm sad you never finished it.

Is it safe to assume that the characters all have red hair, unless stated otherwise?

Plz update this story

This shit garbage

A well-written piece of fiction and an enjoyable read through. Shame it is not continued.

But I digress. Thanks for this again :)

so I'm gonna go out on a limb and sat it was Danzo who intercepted the requests for help, also that he had spun a lie to Hiruzen that Uzu had already fallen. that would make sense to me at least

I really hope you come back to this story! I love the memory seal idea and I also love the manipulation games that shuko plays!