Reviews for If You'll Follow Me, Sir
sd4ianto chapter 1 . 11/16
All the Captains logs and anything you hear it's that he was on a month suspension. But when he went in and started cleaning up at the end of the show when Jack and Gwen were standing at the window watching him, Jack's lip is still split. If it had been a month a normal person's lip would be healed or almost. But with Jack's ability there is no way his wouldn't be.
FranArian chapter 1 . 4/4/2016
I can actually see Ianto doing all that...trying to make it as neat and easy on Jack as possible...
Narshia chapter 1 . 10/23/2015
I thought he was skipping town by his thoughts on the time and that he had to hurry before they came. So when Jack arrived i thought 'he's out of time'. Anyways i like this. It would've been nice if they did kiss but it is to soon for that.
buddieswithbilis chapter 1 . 1/11/2015
Wow, what a powerful story ... the bathroom scene especially was particularly difficult to read ... couldn't help but feel as desperate as both Ianto and Jack at that moment.

Very well written and deserving of a second read.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
Thankyou. DottyWho. 20.10.2014.
TenthDoctor34 chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
aww poor Jack
LadyAnalyn chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
This was really good. I am a little confused though, at this point in the series no one should know Jack was a time agent, despite what he said to Ianto at the warehouse. I think they just accepted that Jack says random and weird things. Unless I'm missing something here, which is very possible because I am a blonde and originally from Southern California. Great job though, I always love a comforting Jack.

jekyllhj7 chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Great story. Really intense - prob cuz of my weird connection wtih Ianto and the fact that (other than the cyberwoman thing) I have had days where I felt like this.

Too bad I dont have a Jack type person. Sigh.
Bloodsong 13T chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
wonderful, brilliant story. it was very chilling how ianto was so considerate to prepare for his own execution.

i never really understood how ianto transitioned from being in love with lisa, and then traumatized by her death, and then going on with jack. this just explains it all so perfectly. thank you!
Cariad-456 chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
This has to be one of the saddest but cutest things I've ever read. 3 I must have screamed "JUST KISS HIM ALLREADY" at least 10 times xD
Winterine chapter 1 . 9/11/2012
What more can I add to what everyone else has already said? :)
Well-written, believable plot, excellent characterisation and dialogue...a great read! Thankies for sharing!
WhoMuse chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
What a moving exploration of Jack and Ianto's feelings post-Cyberwoman! Ianto's bravery, and the misery underlying it, are palpable, and you've provided compelling explanations why Jack opted for neither Retcon nor execution as Ianto was clearly expecting him to do.
I love that they were able to truly talk (because men often don't, especially THESE men, I'm thinking) and reach a new understanding because of it. And now neither of them has to be alone. :)

You've got some great lines here, like this one:

"I am truly sorry that this is so hard for you, Sir. It never occurred to me that you'd have difficulty executing me." Ianto shrugged. "I wish I were strong enough to pull the trigger for you, Sir, but I'm not."

When Ianto said this I got as twisted up inside as Jack. Ouch!
WinterDance chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Brilliantly stark and emotional.
Torchwood Cardiff chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Great story, liked it.:-)
ChimeraDragon chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Well written and creepy.

Like the ending and the imagery.

I really enjoyed it.
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