|Reviews for Mr Salad|
| me chapter 1 . 6/14
hi this fic is five years old but i love it and thought i would comment so. thank u
| Rye Scop chapter 1 . 4/21
This story was great! I don't think your grammar was too terrible, and I laughed at the ending.
| Naty chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
If we stop to think rex have six as a father figure and doc as a motherly one
César is disturbing Six's territory - Six went berserk
| T. Alana M chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
Okay, that makes sense XD
| anonymous chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
I loved this story! It was so funny XD. You could make a sequel to this about Caesar explaining that Rex was kidnapped when he was younger to Rex and everyone else would be there.
| Midena chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
I loved it! Was Rex really kidnapped before, or was that only Six's overactive imagination? If he was, it would be really interesting to see how you'd write it (hint, hint)
| resett chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
ahahahahahaha 3 love it! very nice! I really liked it, specially because is focused on Rex too 3 and the Holix was nice! hehe~ poor Six at the end 3
I noted a few grammar errors but the fic itself is a hundred percent understandable so it's okay, it works for me at least (since english is my second language I didn't have a problem).
Anyways (Y) keep it up!
| Starshinesoldier chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Is it wrong of me to dislike Six cause he dislikes Caesar? c.c You've turned me into such a fan for him. XD -protective fan girl instincts activate!-
| Tofukitten chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
I'm late! And I love this! Ahagaghalkgn
| itisfinished12062015 chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
Your story was funny and intriguing. I think you captured the character traits well. Who so you rex was kidnapped by?
| MonyShot chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
This is amazing. I love how you write :3 Youre just AWESOME ..i cant wait to read when you write more ...
| The White Rose Pianist chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
I must say that I love this very much. The way that you compared Cesar to salad, and the moment that Rex couldn't say Caesar. I must repeat that I loved it.
I actually find that you're grammar is very good, and I hope you don't mind me saying that "The agent is a rookie who was recently hired from Providence's South America branch." should be 'was a rookie' and 'hired for Providence's'. I apologize again, but I see that you have great English and just wanted to inform you so you can make improvments for near the future, but I doubt much will be neccessary.
Cesar's pizza choice is rather strange... I wonder if it's good? It's an interesting topic and I think that one of these days I should try it.
I really do love it. You're word length is great, the way you're characters, you're plot, you're style is just fantastic.
And I love the way you put Cesar. To me he's a pretty good guy who loves his brother and you've put it in so beautifully. Please keep on writing.
-The Star of Robin, Robin's Star
| Second daughter of Eve chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Wow! Never noticed the coincidences before! This it really a hoot though.
| meowfactory chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
This is just so perfect. I love how you pointed out the naming theme there (Rex & 'Caesar' as king and emperor), and your Six is so well written. I'm looking forward to reading some of your other fics! (:
| KaliAnn chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Excellent story! I really like your take on things