Reviews for Harry Potter & the Halfblood Auror
Jarius Black chapter 40 . 5/15
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *Deep Breath* OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I Need to finish this story! I have been through every emotion I can think of while reading it, I have never read a story that has gotten me so engrossed with the characters. Please Update soon.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/12
Cradle robbed becomes cradle robber, eh?
V-rcingetorix chapter 40 . 5/12
Good luck! Looking forward to the ending, when you can get to it :)
Andromedaa chapter 1 . 5/6
Please update this stoey.
It is so awesome!
You can't give it up now.
Andromedaa chapter 40 . 5/1
hey,
really loving this story so please update.
its been ages...
thanks.
Guest chapter 40 . 3/13
Probably my favorite tonks story of all time I love this story please update
Runecutter chapter 31 . 3/8
Will he try to get Scrimgeour to sign off on more training? Good luck with that.

As for the traitor blabbing out Harry being at the Tonks or in London... especially London made it look like it was this arse of an ex-boyfriend Nick, he turned suddenly up, he was angry, he got rebutted and tadaaa... Deffies all over the place. Then the phone call right before Dora and Harry went for their walk and the big trap was started... she only said it was someone from her past, would fit too.

But i think now that those were only nice, comfortable distractions, strewn in to throw your readers off the real tracks... Which is Dumbledore forcing Harry's hand through letting Snape betray his "secret" hiding place over the holidays so he would only any more be ready to go to Durzkaban at the next opportunity. I could picture him desperate enough to want to force the solution to his "problem" (aka Harry-crux must die) to a point before he dies himself and have Snape kill off the last Horcruxes and Volditroll after that. Or it's because this way they hope to get an answer to the problem of "what the heck has Snape vowed to do for Draco should the brat be prevented from doing it" so Snape must not die from oath breaking before the end of the war...
The story has been so Honks centric and secretive that a lot of the small traces necessary to read those bigger pictures never made it into the chapters and we're now almost blind. The only thing painfully obvious is the multiple hints and slips of tongue given to Harry about his fate as a horcrux (e.g. being compared to Nagini who needs an horcrux for her connection to Voldipoldi... or his spidersense when finding a horcrux) I'm curious how much longer harry can stay oblivious bout that and how he'll react (just kidding, he'll react on impulse, badly and with as much chance for disaster as possible, this is a a fanfiction after all :D it lives from bad decisions made by good characters ;))
Runecutter chapter 30 . 3/8
Well if this does not kill him or rather drive him into suicide by hand of Volditroll...
How can she be "sorry" for her drunken escapades and just a few days, mere moments between both of them, later do this so much worse and destructive to him?

Like a pyromanic moth in a Napalm shop... O.o

This will end in a great, loud, furious BANG. Hopefully smething resembling normalcy is still left over and liveable in after the fact.
Runecutter chapter 3 . 3/2
Was the lead up to the ministry that different in this story? Else he should have mentioned that she also was the one behind the Dementor attack on Dudley and him the year before and tried to cruciatus either him or Hermione (can't just remember whom). it surely should help their case, even if the evidence situation is slightly less concrete as with the scars from the blood quill...
Thatguy666777 chapter 1 . 2/8
Are you gonna continue this? Please do i'm dying to read more, it's amazing. Best fanfic on here XD
jojobevco chapter 40 . 2/6
Excellent Story
bugzadc chapter 40 . 1/25
I was just re-reading this. This is an incredibly frustrating spot to end things. Otherwise, I enjoyed my second read through.
Gamma Lead chapter 40 . 1/2
This is quite an interesting fic, in the realism and uniqueness displayed in the background of Dora. The relationship, age and mental (thoughts) issues preventing her from accepting Harry as well as the baggage. It was to the point that it also reminded me of one of my exes, so if nothing else, I think it is written with real-world influence (never a bad thing). That being said, while I got to this point, I'm not altogether interested in continuing, the above cliffhanger or not. A big factor is the perpetual one step forwards, two steps back on things, largely the relationship between the two (I'm fine with tension, the part breakup was realistic, but continued problems is not something I'm in the mood to continue reading, realistic or not.

As for the rest of the story, you've done an excellent job there as well, as far as explaining what all is going on (Dumble's condition for one) as well as creating new and interesting issues (Sanny and the ministry, B&B rapier training) and great scenes (the vacations at the Tonks's). All this good stuff kept me going but the aforementioned Dora issues started grating, so in a way I'm happy the story petered out (not wanting to force myself to continue reading as I had the past couple chapters) nor wishing the story to end due to the fanfic literary gold that was here.

At any rate, no matter what you get out of the above, good job here and while it won't be on my update list, It's definitely still a good story.
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 40 . 12/17/2014
You have to update! This is such an amazing story, and I really hope it isn't abandoned, especially at this point.
Keep up the awesome work! :D
Tarah xXx
KonohasBlackReaper chapter 40 . 12/12/2014
Thanks for the effort in writing such a nice fic and the honesty. . . . Still, hope that you manage to knock that curveball out of the park, and not just so you write again.
Stay strong and God Bless.

-KBR
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