Reviews for Trees
bobbyneko chapter 1 . 9/8
Aquarius Galuxy chapter 1 . 5/16
Enjoyed reading this a lot - not so much the rape, but how you shaped the story to your vision. I was fascinated by the descriptions of their surroundings, and how realistic the injuries were, the broken nose and splinters, all the way to the tearing of intestines during the rape.
Very intrigued by the short sentences and characterizations.. definitely not what I expected to find while wandering through the TRC fandom :)
thank you for sharing!
levysbookshelf chapter 1 . 3/14
This was really awesomely written but my poor Syaoran! Omg! Still loved it though.
Dragonbookaddict chapter 1 . 2/15
I read this and find myself enjoying it far more than I thought I would. No, I'm not some sick bastard who enjoys people being raped. What draws me in is HOW you wrote this, and the sheer amount of emotion flowing from these words to me. I can practically feel Syaoran's terror, his pain, his agony that comes from facing his soulless clone. No matter what the contents hold, when a story can make you feel the emotions of the characters within, it is a true gem that should be treasured often. That being said, I find myself wanting to know what happens next; Does Syaoran freeze to death before reaching the others? Does he tell the others what happened, or does Fai smell it on him before he can say anything? How would Fai, Kurogane, Sakura, and Mokana react when they find out what happened? How does Syaoran deal with his trauma?
anonimo chapter 1 . 1/15
me gustaría continuación de este relato es muy bueno, quiero ver el trauma de tsubasa por lo que le paso y como se enteran los demás de esto
Fullyalivefeelin chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Wow! That was intense and well written!
I would totally like to see what the other world react after finding out...
kashmir chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
you're a sick fuck
Baka Neko chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
This was awesome. All I can say. It would be really cool if you could write where the others find out. I love angst...And tradegy...Horror...Suspense...


But awesome writting! I wish I had your writting skills. Dude, he was so brutal, so malicious (Spelling?), it was wonderful!
AnjoRemix chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
me: omg! waahh my poor Tsubasa! *chases after the clone* YOU BASTARD! U NO HEART! TT

Remix: u know by the time u're able to catch up to him he's off to a different dimension...

me: so what i'll chase him till the end of time to murder him!

Remix: then that'll kill the original plot...

me: idc!

Remix: *bangs head on desk* *puts up a sign saying* "We loved this and dun mind the idiot chasing after the character she'll come back sometime soon..."
Bluring chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Wow! I don't even know what to say. That was intense! You should totally make it into a short story.
The Tempest Road chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Damn. You brought a whole new meaning to the term "Go fuck youself". Loved the story by the way, two-shot?
snoopygirl11 chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
Dark and really written well 3 Syaoran's inner thoughts were brilliant and his feelings of helplessness were portrayed well. _
Forgot chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
Wow... speechless at this amazing story... please please continue!
Justice Tokidoki chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
Wow...I'm speechless.

Very well written...though I had to skim/skip over some parts...

Very creepy...
Guest chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
i like this a lot; it's dark and really done well. it would be nice to see how you plan for this to turn into a short story, so i would very much like you to continue! please continue! :)
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