Reviews for Hold Out For Me
Samantha adams chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
awesome dude
angeltrin1 chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Damn that was just HOT! I men I hd towipeup the drool. Yummy and thank you for writing this!
EdwardAndSam's chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Yummy story! I love it!
Jasper chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
had a sick twisted grin on my face the whole time while reading this Ive read a only a handful of wincest stories I'm gonna say 5 total 2 happy to say were written by you the stripper sam story and hold out for me stripper story I understand its shortness the purposs of stripping is the tease as a male who has had lap dances from women and men I thoroughly enjoy both so that tease left me wanting more as it was supposed too now on to hold out for me was perfect one thing guys never say member its mostly cock dick its funny all the wincest stories ive read sammy is always the bottom lol but like ive said ivre only read 5but will be reading loads more of yours they're very good thanks oh and often slap a guys ass really hard while topping him makes his whole ass tighten up clench down etc both guys really like it but I understsnd it not being in this story first time is always well not full throttle it being sammys first hed be plenty Tight already haha oh gosh is it okay to perv in a comment/review lol cause I just did lol
pyrolover3 chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
AWE!
WhereDoIGoFromHere811 chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
a perfect balance of Adorable and HOT3 awesome job
loverboysgirl chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
wow
purpleushi chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
Ahhh so hot. I love your stories bb! This kept me entertained through econ class :]
NeoCortex chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
I like it~ So sweet~

My ONLY critique would be that you may want to work on your sentence structure a bit in some places.

Other than that, I loved it and am very glad that you wrote another WINCEST~ Nummy nummy WINCEST~ XD

Love and Good Reading/Writing~

NeoCortex~
cold kagome chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
omg.. love it.. soo hot and sweet..