|Reviews for The Custodian|
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/20
please update soon i cant wait to read the next chap i also hope saber/arturia comes in soon
| ThePizziaMan chapter 5 . 3/23/2014
This is really good. I hope you update soon.
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/10/2014
Great story hope you update soon
| ChaosRagnak chapter 5 . 2/6/2014
I know the story is 2 years old as of now, but i sincerely hope you finish it. I love how the story is progressing and hope to read more of it :)
| The Master Warlord chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
This is good and interesting, but such a pain to read. When you write, you should only have one person talk in quotes each paragraph, as to not cause confusion on who is speaking. What I see right now is a story that I probably would've enjoyed when it is not as difficult to read as right now. I might reread it if this problem is resolved though.
| zaber999 chapter 5 . 7/16/2013
it has been almost a year please try to update again soon
| voidblade6 chapter 5 . 6/26/2013
... sooo are you ever going to update this cause this is the one of the better stories I have ever read.
| voidblade6 chapter 3 . 6/26/2013
rei bashing is easy... she is a bitch! Then again takashi is a Dick with a capital D so they kinda deserve each other..
| Lu Bane Na chapter 4 . 5/11/2013
Ehh!? Rider's in this one!
| Lu Bane Na chapter 2 . 5/11/2013
Hey, I know a great idea for your FSN/Muv Luv story. Well, it could be either Fate Zero or FSN. In either, Medusa Rider or Berserker Lancelot being Eishis, Rider because she's a pro at any kind of vehicle, and Berserker corrupting a Takemikazuchi and using it to mulch a herd of BETA would be pretty awesome.
| Uraharaisgod chapter 5 . 4/21/2013
Hrm, interesting...so, the Servants are called to this world for a reason nobody knows, and they seem to be former Servants only, Iskandir and Assasin of the 4th War, plus EMIYA of the 5th War. I'm curious as to whether or not Saber will appear later, and if so which incarnation it will be (4th or 5th Saber, or if it is a later or earlier Arturia, or a different Servant alltogether)
| HopeBreaker chapter 5 . 3/11/2013
WOW This is a great story
| Matthew Blackheart chapter 5 . 3/3/2013
| skie89 chapter 5 . 2/11/2013
This is a really interesting story. I am interested to see just how you mix the Heaven's Feel theme with Highschool of the Dead's plot. Though you'll probably have to start making up your own plot soon enough.
| ibstudent220 chapter 2 . 1/3/2013
English 101: Only one person should speak in each paragraph. Ignoring this rule makes it hard to track who is saying what. The author also doesn't seem to know what "disillusioned" means.