Reviews for If
iampennylane chapter 9 . 10/12
IF...only you had been writing the script!

Excellent work. Thank you for giving us another outstanding Castle adventure that we can experience over and over again.
iampennylane chapter 1 . 10/12
Another winner. I can tell already!
rina123nike chapter 9 . 3/17/2022
can't believe I have never read this before. great story
Bookwormw chapter 9 . 7/7/2021
This was so good and it was a sweet ending but I just wish you had Kate go to Castle and she fights for him for once. She fought this relationship the whole way, it just would've been a nice surprise. Other than that it was an awesome take on them!
CileSuns92 chapter 9 . 2/28/2021
Awww, these two. I love how in just 9 chapters we saw their whole story unfolding. Or well, folding, unraveling, and then gathering the mess back into a heart-shaped relationship. I love how he takes care of her, even when she fights him, and how he persists, even when she tries to push him away. It's really a testament to his feelings, the fact that he has to chase, instead of being chased.

Thank you for writing this wonderful story and sharing it with us, I loved it!
AngelLonginus chapter 9 . 6/20/2018
Fantastic story! I loved it so much! I can definitely see why it has so many follows and favorites. Great writing!
janinsc chapter 9 . 9/15/2017
I am in love with this story. I found it this week and am sad that I finished it. You did an amazing job and I thank you for your time and effort.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/19/2017
Your version of Kate has the emotional maturity of a bratty teenager.
Guest chapter 6 . 1/19/2017
Kate had no right snooping in Castles stuff
nolesome chapter 5 . 1/4/2016
I like the parenthesis "thing" in each chapter. It's a fun preview of where it's going. Also, I have pop tarts for breakfast most days and there's nothing wrong with that. Hot Pockets, though? Nasty.
nolesome chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
Just found this story after watching the ep over the weekend, I love it so far!

"even if she's still got walls, he's got a wrecking ball hiding in his goddamn smile."
Loooove that line. They both have that knock-you-over smile, that's a perfect way to write it.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/15/2015
Love this Castle taking care of sick Kate. Love this kate allowing Castle to take care of her. Enjoying.
PeterGunn chapter 9 . 12/13/2014
It always amazes me when a writer calls a prologue - like this one - a complete story.

It must be the old "gotta have angst", "stories must be dark" nonsense. OK, you've done your angst penance, now write the STORY this prologue points to. No, a real story, not an obeisance to the &$ &%$ angst rule. A real story about people.

Guest chapter 9 . 6/29/2014
That was the most beautiful reconciliation I've ever read ...
Guest chapter 8 . 6/29/2014
Aww hurt Beckett :/
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