| Reviews for If |
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   iampennylane chapter 9 . 10/12 IF...only you had been writing the script! Excellent work. Thank you for giving us another outstanding Castle adventure that we can experience over and over again. |
| iampennylane chapter 1 . 10/12 Another winner. I can tell already! |
| rina123nike chapter 9 . 3/17/2022 can't believe I have never read this before. great story |
| Bookwormw chapter 9 . 7/7/2021 This was so good and it was a sweet ending but I just wish you had Kate go to Castle and she fights for him for once. She fought this relationship the whole way, it just would've been a nice surprise. Other than that it was an awesome take on them! |
| CileSuns92 chapter 9 . 2/28/2021 Awww, these two. I love how in just 9 chapters we saw their whole story unfolding. Or well, folding, unraveling, and then gathering the mess back into a heart-shaped relationship. I love how he takes care of her, even when she fights him, and how he persists, even when she tries to push him away. It's really a testament to his feelings, the fact that he has to chase, instead of being chased. Thank you for writing this wonderful story and sharing it with us, I loved it! |
| AngelLonginus chapter 9 . 6/20/2018 Fantastic story! I loved it so much! I can definitely see why it has so many follows and favorites. Great writing! |
| janinsc chapter 9 . 9/15/2017 I am in love with this story. I found it this week and am sad that I finished it. You did an amazing job and I thank you for your time and effort. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/19/2017 Your version of Kate has the emotional maturity of a bratty teenager. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/19/2017 Kate had no right snooping in Castles stuff |
| nolesome chapter 5 . 1/4/2016 I like the parenthesis "thing" in each chapter. It's a fun preview of where it's going. Also, I have pop tarts for breakfast most days and there's nothing wrong with that. Hot Pockets, though? Nasty. |
| nolesome chapter 1 . 1/4/2016 Just found this story after watching the ep over the weekend, I love it so far! "even if she's still got walls, he's got a wrecking ball hiding in his goddamn smile." Loooove that line. They both have that knock-you-over smile, that's a perfect way to write it. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/15/2015 Love this Castle taking care of sick Kate. Love this kate allowing Castle to take care of her. Enjoying. |
| PeterGunn chapter 9 . 12/13/2014 It always amazes me when a writer calls a prologue - like this one - a complete story. It must be the old "gotta have angst", "stories must be dark" nonsense. OK, you've done your angst penance, now write the STORY this prologue points to. No, a real story, not an obeisance to the &$ &%$ angst rule. A real story about people. jp |
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/29/2014 That was the most beautiful reconciliation I've ever read ... |
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/29/2014 Aww hurt Beckett :/ |