Increadible story - can't wait for the next chapter!

Another story to on my phone though,duh!anyway,love it!

Teeheehee loved it!

OK, this just captures there dynamic so perfectly (translated into a romantic relationship, of course):

"He wants to take her out for Valentine's Day. She says no. She knows there'll be press. They fight about it. They make up spectacularly. In February, Ryan and Jenny get married. She waits for Rick to ask her if they can go together (you know, officially), but he doesn't. She waits and waits. She gets cranky when he doesn't, and he doesn't understand why she's upset. She doesn't either. They fight again. Make up again. She's naked and sweating, draped over his chest, when she asks. Let's go to the wedding together. She can hear him smiling, but all he says is okay."

I'm excited for the tension you've added back into the story at the end of this chapter.

I am so enjoying this. So sweet and hot and well done and in character, and just awesome. So looking forward to more.:)

Oh wow. I just stumbled across this and it is SO GOOD and it's two in the morning and I have to get up with the kids tomorrow so I can't read the rest of it right now. Ah! Because it's awesome and I want to read it all in one gulp. Definitely coming back tomorrow.:)

I love it how you skipped some time here. Gave us all the important details, and we still know how the story goes.

Hah. His secret is out. Ouch. And in that way. And after so long.

I love it how you write them. Completely in character.

Loved the part with public kissing. I can definitely imagine that conversation with Castle.

Can't wait to see how this is going to go!

Thanks for this story and for the referral to Cartographical!

Oh my gosh. Just... oh my gosh! AHHHH. Thanks for the update by the way :) But... ahhhh!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Everything was so HAPPY AND SEXY, and I will NEVER forgive all these evil, evil murderers for effing up this potentially explosively sexy relationship that needs to happen, like, NOW.

But obviously, I love this story.

NOOOOOO! I bet this is how it actually happens on the show -_-

Oh my word, I can feel my heart pounding all the way down in my stomach. And my eyes are so wide. "What the hell is this?" in the face of his hopeful playfulness is just ABSOLUTELY CRUSHING. Beautiful. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for more.

shit shit shit - I hate these secrets, I don't want any more reasons for them to stay apart... and there relationship was just starting to move on nicely :(

I just knew you were going to leave us hanging. Please don't rip my heart out again. It will be hard enough over the summer with no knew Castle. This last chapter is great and had me on the edge of my seat, please don't wait too long.

No. No. No. No. No.

Okay, now that I've got that out of my system. Oh my User! Whoa, didn't expect for that to happen. I mean, I wasn't expecting the sex either, but this is just like x_X. I wonder how Castle's going to dig himself out of it..if he's going to dig himself out of it. Please update soon!