Reviews for If
eyrianone chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Oooh. That was so lovely . . . why do I have this horrible feeling the other shoe is going to be a damn steel-toed, lead weighted gumboot? And I'll still be reading it - who am I kidding.
Mcat3x chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
So glad you're back. Love the back and forth... Looking forward to ch 2
knittingeek chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Oh this was delicious...thanks to Carto for being so demanding;o)

So glad there is more!
GhostWriterLost chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Delightful as usual. If i quoted all the lines i liked, i'd be one of those tiresome people who copied the whole thing into the review. That being said, the lines that were absolutely perfectly them:

"She's halfway to the elevator when he calls out after her. "I won't pretend this didn't happen."

She smiles to herself. When she turns around, she's straight-faced. She hopes. "Of course you won't.""


Given your final author's note, are you saying that the best way to 'encourage' more stuff from you is to nag Cartographical and she'll nag you? Does it work in reverse too; if we nag you, will you nag Cartographical to cough up something new too?
RainneCassidy chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Ooh! I was VERY excited to see new fic from you, and this first chapter is terrific! I can't wait for more. :D
Cartographical chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Yo, yo, I always KNEW that my constant and unyielding demands for fic were charming! Fortunately, these demands are positively reinforced by your production of awesome fic like this, so, don't worry, they will never, ever stop.

... Ever.
spauldinga chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
I love this. Can't wait for more.
Chanteuse chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Ohhh. Well. This was gorgeous. Your writing style is beautiful-it pulled me right in, gave me chills. I'm definitely intrigued, and can't wait to read more! :D
International08 chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
So incredibly good. Glad there's more to come.
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