By the end of this chapter I'd forgotten it had 8 more. I so wished it didn't end! So so true to the characters! Loving every line.

I confess third person limited is growing on me. Donald Hamilton used it a lot and I liked his books too. Especially "The Mona Intercept". This was a really fun story to read. I will doubtless read more of your stories. I might have to experiment with 3rd person limited and see if I can make it work.

I'll probably never think of the one liners like you do though.

Thanks.

When I read, "She regrets it a little when he starts puking three days later," I busted out laughing. Great line! Loved it. The tone of your writing is great.

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For whatever reason I did not read the final three chapters when you first posted them, but I found them as I was cleaning up my inbox and I just wanted to say that they were absolutely wonderful! The whole story has been great, and such a different approach compared to so many other stories, and I just, both back when you first wrote it and as I read the finals parts today, I just really enjoyed it. It has been such a sweet story and this final chapter was marvellous. I really, really liked it. Great work!

Mathilde

That was a really sweet and lovely story! Thanks for those nice moments of reading.

if I hadn't read this then I would have missed out on an incredible story

What a wonderful finish here. That whole last exchange made my heart happy. Excellent story!

I loved this whole story! Cute and sweet and angsty and all quite lovely. Thank you for sharing it with us.

It is a wonderful story. Not too long but so intense.
I love the increasing tension over the last chapters and the final "shut up and do it again".
I can easily imagine their relation in the show could be the same a kind of cat&dog interaction.
I like very much your writing and the fact that as a reader we can SO very well picture every move/sound/heartbeat...

PS : any soon update of "look after you" ?

Awwww, I'm always a sucker for a happy ending.

Loved this story.

Just found this. So good. So good! Ack. Just. Yeah. Thank you!

beautifil chapter!

Fabulous conclusion! Thanks :)

"... even if she's still got walls, he's got a wrecking ball hiding in his goddamn smile."

That is probably the single best line I've read since I started reading Castle fics. It's just too damn perfect.

Great ending- it definitely fits in with the rest of the story.