Reviews for Penitence
sparrowfalling chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
Ooooh, I love this idea. Very well executed. Changes the way I see Meredith. Wish it was cannon.
emilymarie0201 chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
Oh. My. Goodness. I was literally on the edge of my couch, eyes glued to the screen, heart pounding. The end not expected. SO SO well done! Awesome job!
FenixPhoenix chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
Lovely story. Loved how it was written and, more than that, the darkness of it. I could actually feel the character's dilemmas and confusion as to what was right and who she was.

Excellent job! And congrats for making it into the top 5!
Nithu chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
A very chilling insight into both Meredith and Alrik. Congratulations on your place in the top 5.
Fluidfyre chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
Ahh I love the brutality of this most of all. The style within which you've written it - the short sentences in particular - lend to the urgency of it. It contributes to one's own sense of fear (that you write is as 'you'). And the ending! Not what I expected at all. So much in such a short space, love it!
wangxiuming chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
Props for this interesting examination into the mind of Meredith! Nice twist at the end, with plenty of clues leading up to it (hence, the best kind of twist). Awesome!