Reviews for Melt MikuXKaito
KawaiiNeko7031 chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
OMG i was melting 2!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
I love the romance and intimidation!
Gothic-Romantic99 chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
This is a pretty good story. I like how you made Miku somewhat shy here. Kaito is such a sweetheart. The ending is really sweet.

It's nice how you show how Miku is so in love with Kaito, though she doesn't want to say anything right away. It makes the ending much more special that way. Good work with choosing this to be in first person and it does sound like Miku is talking.

One bit of advice, you should never put an author's note in the middle of the story unless it is of the utmost importance. Author's notes in the text are distracting, especially when the story is told in first person. You can add it as a footnote at the end of your story, or in this case, since Miku is the one telling the story, you can have her tell this little detail to the audience.

In all this is a cute story. Nice job.
MeAndMyReflection chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
Ah...! So cute! Many spelling was wrong, but you always made an ending that could stick into mind for a long time! Keep it up!
snowlily chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
aw

it's really cute

hope you will do mikuxkaito again