Reviews for Hidden Feelings
draco122 chapter 1 . 6/14/2014
very nice
Blake Geometrio chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
Beautiful. You have captured the emotion that Rarity had for Twilight, and I absolutely love that. You stuck to character and did something I can never do, you had a plot in the story and it wasn't all over the place like my crap written be of impulses!

Anywho, you're story deserves an award I say!
Please, never stop writing. If you do, I will miss you and your works.

To an amazing author! Here is a seal of approval from a random teenager!
-Blake 6/5/13
Eclipsestorm4 chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Good story. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Liam chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
Nice. Short and sweet. I love how you managed to capture Rarity's language and mannerisms. I could actually hear her voice in my head as I read it. Most other stories I can barely get an image in my head. But you described her wonderfully. The introduction was very good too. I only found one error, but it is so small to be nearly unnoticeable. I just notice these things naturally. I just thought that perhaps Rarity wouldn't say something like "[she had] spaced out" I would have thought she would say something like "My apologies Twilight, I was thinking about something else. Still, this deserves a definite 10/10. Good job.
ChocolateScentedTerror chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
Haha! Love the ending! D
Sayit chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
It's very cute and good!

Maredrid means Madrid? lol xD good
mlpfim fan chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
an amazingly sweet story. 10 out of 10.
Sergeant Daniel chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Cute. Very cute. I loved it, good job:D
kitmaro chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Very sweet story.