Reviews for Harry Potter and the Rebirth of Darkness
Harmonious Cannons chapter 21 . 12/31/2016
This is an excellent story, and you may not read it, but you have got a little mistake here. Frank Longbottom is a witness for the will. And Sirius tells Harry in Chapter 7 that the Longbottoms were attacked in 1982 (which is wrong ac. to canon, btw). Makes the Longbottoms complicit in Sirius' incarceration and Harry's abandonment.
HarryHermioneEdwardBella chapter 19 . 8/23/2016
nice story so far
HarryHermioneEdwardBella chapter 18 . 8/23/2016
amazing chapter
HarryHermioneEdwardBella chapter 17 . 8/23/2016
Love the chapter
love the intense harry and hermione moments
HarryHermioneEdwardBella chapter 16 . 8/23/2016
nice chapter
cool
HarryHermioneEdwardBella chapter 5 . 8/22/2016
nice chapter
HarryHermioneEdwardBella chapter 2 . 8/22/2016
cool chapter
keitaropurple69 chapter 27 . 7/26/2016
I love this story and it is very original.
Guest chapter 27 . 7/19/2016
Pretty good. I'm looking forward to the sequel. You do have some grammar issues that need to be worked out, though, as well as improper word use.
Guest chapter 23 . 7/19/2016
You need to learn what it means to take things at face value. If you take something at face value, you don't go looking any deeper, you believe what you are being told, you trust the person giving you the information. The way you use the expression is almost the exact opposite.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/19/2016
I've kept quiet until now, but you really need someone to proof your work. There are many instances where you've used words incorrectly. For example, in this chapter, you kept using 'rampart' when you really meant 'rampant'. There are also many, many instances of very poor grammar.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/19/2016
Go Minerva!
stevefocus chapter 27 . 5/20/2016
Great story, looking forward to reading the next.
gleefan2009 chapter 27 . 4/18/2016
love it
senawario chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
good story, nicely done. One (minor?) plot hole: if the Longbottoms were tortured a year after Harry's parents died, and Frank Longbottom was a witness to the Potter's will (which included Sirius's innocence), then why didn't he object to Sirius being locked up?
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