Wow, what a shock! I did not expect that! So tragic and heartbreakingly beautiful. I just wish Edward made Bella understand. Your concepts and writing are so original and remarkable!

I so wish for a follow up. I need to know what happens when dumb ass Edward finds Bella.

Tragic yet beautiful. How would he react to the discovery and cope with the lose?

So sad

Will be able to save her?

OMG! I loved the fic, but stake hating Edward until I read the ending! Perfect, loved it too, congratulations!

Great story. I knew from the beginning what i thought and the ending confirmed it. It's just i didn't get the name Maribel until the end. Clever...Isabelle Marie Cullen Maribel the middle and and first name. He loved who she was but he tend to forget that the are two of the same and Maribel is always going to be Bella no matter what. He was waiting for her to turn to her other self and neglecting her true self. He was having and affair with his wife other person.

Wow

So heartbreaking. I loved it.

i love it i actually though he was cheating on her i felt so sorry for her and i felt so sad for her and i cried at the end he going to be so traumatized when he find her body , i though atlest he would have someone to comfort him but at the end it turn out that isabella is maribel and i felt so so sad

omg I think j just died. this is suchhh a great story omg please continue

Ohhhhhh, you got me there! Well done.

Such a well written story...though I'm completely heartbroken.

Wow. I wish it was a story with .

Si j'ai tout compris maribel et Bella sont la même personne ? Donc Bella se suicide parce qu'edward la trompe avec elle même et qu'elle veut lui laisser une chance d'être heureux avec une autre qui au final n'existe pas ? Est ce qu'il va y avoir une suite ? J'aurais aimé voir la réaction d'Edward face au geste de Bella qui au final est la conséquence de ses actes ! Merci