|Reviews for It's always darkest before the dawn|
| Drssong chapter 5 . 1/22/2012
I loved the way you showed River learning to be vulnerable
| slightly so chapter 5 . 1/22/2012
That was fantastic, I cried, write more!
| FirstFloor chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
This is amazing. I absolutely appreciate your specificity in spatial orientations and the movements of the characters. It creates such a cinema-status crisp visual image.
| SheWillBeAmazing chapter 5 . 1/21/2012
I really enjoyed your story. I like that you dealt with the inevitable challenges River must have gone through after all that has happened to her. And I especially liked how you tied her being young and not trusting the Doctor yet to her experience meeting young him in the Library.
| Snowy Ashes chapter 5 . 1/21/2012
| Snowy Ashes chapter 4 . 1/21/2012
Oh. My. Goodness.
I... I have nothing to say.
I started copying all the bits I liked, but then I realized I was just copying over the whole chapter, one paragraph at a time.
I am slack-jawed and in shock (right along with River).
| Snowy Ashes chapter 3 . 1/21/2012
Yes. See what you did? You took all of my suggestions and made them even better! Lol, what do you even need me for?
"'No.' This time it was the regent's turn to be interrupted. The Doctor now spoke in a tone of absolute authority and finality. Though it looked out of place coming from his young, gangly form, it was a tone earned by centuries of living and had within it the sound of dying worlds."
...yessssssssssss. EPIC. WIN. Doctor, marry me too, please. (I'm sure River will be reeeeally big on sharing.)
BEVERLYMALDORAN FOR THE WIN!
| grumpyjenn chapter 5 . 1/21/2012
Oh. Oh geez. This was absolutely wonderful.
| grumpyjenn chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
You definitely know what you're doing. I'm really enjoying your work
| smokeydog chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
this looks interesting
I enjoy examining River's life at stormcage.
| B-D Banzai chapter 2 . 1/18/2012
Fantastic. I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for sharing!
| Drssong chapter 2 . 1/18/2012
Please keep writing this story. I know she'll feel better if she talks about it
| PresidentTheAwesome chapter 2 . 1/18/2012
:O:O Oh no River! Can;t wait to see what happens next, update soon! :D
| Snowy Ashes chapter 2 . 1/18/2012
Whaaaaat? Oh my goodness, THAT was unexpected!
Haha... and quite a plot device to get River to sleep, too, huh? Ooh, that's brilliant. ;D
More, please! :)))
| Snowy Ashes chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Oooh, PLEEEASE tell me she's gonna get better... *sigh* Poor River...
This is really excellent so far. I can't wait to read the rest... :)))