Reviews for Just a Date
Edhla chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Enjoyed this one :) There were some lovely lines, and the emotions came across well. There were places where there were a few SPaG errors that made it difficult for me to work out what you meant, for example, '"Deunan." his voice barely audible' (this seems to be missing a few words?). But on the whole, enjoyed muchly. Thank you for writing x
AnneLea chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Sweet. I like the internal struggle on his end, but would have liked to see some on hers.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
I'm 14 but Love it
Vysin chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
SOOOO cute! I was squealing at then end. Please make more! :D It is so engrossing to read
AoUsagi chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
really sweet - that was simply wonderful to read! short, sweet, and so beautifully sincere! ;D
Everlasting Life chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
Absolutely stunning. :) Can you make another chapter?