|Reviews for bRoKeN bOuNdArIeS|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
For something as... awkwardly (but well) written as this, there sure is a lot of priceless humour. Excellent job.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
The best part of the story: the graphic steamy sex? No. The graphic steamy sex with EVERYONE COMPLETELY IN CHARACTER. It reads like an actual episode of the show despite the fact that Disney Channel, Dan and Swampy would have your head on a stick if it aired. :)
Oh, and I apologize: this may be a reposting of my review for this story as it may not have posted initially for some reason.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
The best part of this story: the graphic steamy sex? No. The graphic steamy sex with everyone COMPLETELY IN CHARACTER. Seriously, I can see this as an episode if it weren't for the fact that the Disney Channel, Dan, and Swampy would have your head on a stick if it made it on air. :)
| anon chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Spot-on characterization, great interpretation. All that PLUS a delicious platyporn scene? Way too much to ask for, but you deliver.
| futureauthor13 chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
(Btw, this is Mordyfan13 from Deviantart. Hi Darkwing! v )
Anyway, before I review, I'm just going to say honestly... I skipped the sex scene. I may be (barely) seventeen, but I was very sheltered and I'm just very awkward with reading that kind of thing, no matter if it's boy-girl, yaoi, or whatever. But, despite seeing the M rating, I saw that it was written by you and it was Perryshmirtz, so I couldn't resist. And I'm glad I did read it, because the stuff I could read was really well written.
First off, Perry and Doof are written PERFECTLY! Everything's in character and nothing seems forced in or out of place. You really captured their relationship well. Then, at the end, I really liked how you gave Doof real emotion. It felt sincere, and it felt like something he would say. I also like, heck I just like his whole monologue! How he cares about Perry (which is totally true) and yet he doesn't want nor need things to drastically change. He just wants to know if Perry feels the same, which is understandable for someone like Doofenshmirtz. Because THAT is what their relationship is! It takes a special kind of fangirl to actually see that! It's okay for them to fight each other and still like each other 'that way' because they are able be themselves around each other and accept one another. There aren't any expectations for either of them to have to make, their relationship is just fun and genuinely caring about one another. That's why I love this pairing so much (now if only I can get my friend to see that so she stops thinking there's something seriously wrong with me XD)
Where was I? Oh yeah! Your awesome story! Anyway, when Perry hit Doof and then squeezed his hand, I'll admit, I squee'd (Such a cute scene!) Of course I loved Doof's line about not wanting to add Perry to the 'awkward backstory' list. XD Again, perfectly in character. And that last line about boundries, that last sentence: And sometimes, what you were fighting all along... Sometimes they're all you really needed. *Claps* Perfect :D
This was a great story, and I can see you're just as great at writing these two as you are drawing them. Great job, Darkwing :D (Maybe if I ever stop feeling so awkward about reading about sex, I'll read the middle of the story. ...HA! Like I'd ever stop being awkward -.-' But at least I'll still be able to read and enjoy the rest of this sweet story v)
| ForThoseWhoLikeToMoveItMoveIt chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
Loved this, you should definitely continue! And I won't be needing that brain bleach xD
| Kasa Nichi chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
I greatly appreciate that Perry remains a platypus in this story :D
| Das Mel chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Oh, I giggled like a LOON while reading this! The way you write Doof is perfect! Every stretched out word pulls the inflection out and into your head and makes it SOUND right! This was a wonderful read, thank you!
| LuticolousMantis chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
I sort of feel odd saying this, but it was very much in character...
Uh, doesn't this mean Monogram and Carl SAW all of that?
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Reading some of your docs give me an almost overpowering urge to write my own fic with this couple. They have so much angst potential it's not even funny. I wonder how the Major and his trusty intern will react(all those cameras inside evil incorporated, odds are probable that someone uncovers their antics, but then so is Candace's chances of catching the boys, and we all know how well that's turned out for her) when they discover what OWCA's top agent is getting up to, especially now that it's spilled over into business hours.
At any rate, I liked the way you chose to portray the characters, it's not often that you can grin at a line your reading in a fanfic, and give a silent word of thanks to the author over the effort they spent trying to keep the personalities intact.
| Maya Serena chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Wonderfully written, and you really threw me for a loop there. I expected Nick-Inator was going to join in at some point. Good job!
| papya chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
he just wants perrys love
and not to get kciked in the teeth
not getting kicked int he teeth is fun