Reviews for The Twist
brennakai chapter 12 . 6/23
OMG! I love the Heel siblings!
Don't get me wrong, I feel seriously sorry for Ren & his mental fortitude... yeah... but they are great characters! I think that they the drama it could be revealed one is adopted, to take a slight edge off the incest.
Yeah I still want to see where this story goes...
How much longer can Ren hold out... how does he catch her, or does he finally get her to see his feelings? No to mention how Lory will join the game...
Last but not least the revival will be a must read I'm sure...

Please, please, please please come back to this so many open questions...
addicted-to-the-fic chapter 12 . 3/14
I know the whole point of Kyoko's character is her refusal to admit she's in love again, but man, sometimes I just want her to confess and spend the rest of the time cuddling with Ren while being a badass actress you know.
Guest chapter 12 . 12/15/2016
Wow! Can't wait to read what happens next
Guest chapter 12 . 11/10/2016
Come now give us an update it's been over a year can we get a posted chapter soon
TDANIEL chapter 12 . 10/7/2016
'HI , I LIKE YOUR STORY I HAVE READ IT SEVERAL TIMES ,,,,BUT I SEE YOU STILL HAVENT UPDATED IT YET,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,I HOPE YOU WILL UPDATE SOON,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,PLEASE UPDATE AND FINISH THE STORY...THANKS,TDANIEL
Guest chapter 12 . 10/7/2016
I'm just asking one question of you when will you update again come on dude it's been too long get up off your Duff get to work post new chapter ASAP
Guest chapter 12 . 9/26/2016
Wow is all I can say not 1 post since this wow we're not loved just left hanging wow
Maria chapter 12 . 9/17/2016
This is amazing I found myself engrossed with it. Kyouko is probably legitimately losing her shit and ren has taken no to little notice. Not something I thought possible since it's the kyouko obsessed ren that knew when she was troubled like some kind of radar going off. Sweet!
Guest chapter 6 . 7/16/2016
Great chapter! :)
Guest chapter 5 . 7/16/2016
Awesome chapter as always! :) I really enjoyed reading it!
Guest chapter 4 . 7/16/2016
Both Kyoko and Ren are so deeply immersed in their characters - it's really fascinating to read about! :) Great job with the chapter! :)
Guest chapter 3 . 7/16/2016
Awesome chapter as always! :)
Guest chapter 2 . 7/16/2016
Ah, Yashiro is such a matchmaker. :) Awesome chapter!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2016
Ooh, interesting beginning! I'm excited to read the rest of this story! :)
BB71 chapter 12 . 6/4/2016
Take it off of hiatus n update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update its been way to long post asap please thnx
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