Reviews for Unusual, yet sweet ol' love
MidnightMoonKid chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
heh, i really liked this first chapter _ i loled a little at the end

Hope there will be more
Ikexsamus lover chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
I Looove it 3 :3 It so funny man :D continue that story IMMADIATELY! :3
gurrlyoubad13 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Hahaha poor Ike I feel bad for him...great story.. wish you could update soon.. I'm dying to know what samus says..keep IkexSamus... maybe MarthxZelda.. idk but please update!
FIckerkdn chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
I like how this had turned out. Poor Ike, he couldn't get the words out without collapsing from nervousness. I wonder if Samus accepted that Ike loves her. I liked this a lot. Nice job. :)
Autistic chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
It is a good idea for a writer to practice there writing.

As for criticism for this fic. Some of the sentences in the story didn’t flow well with each other. And there were some grammar errors. I suggest rereading it to see what mistakes you made so you can remember for next time. (Or if you ever want to redo this chapter.)

As for pairings I like to suggest-

LinkxLyn.

Meta KnightxJigglypuff.

RedxZelda.

PitxPalutena.

NanaxLucas.

PopoxNana.

DaisyxCaptain Falcon.

LuigixSheik.

MarioxPeach.

You can decide which of the above pairings you want to use.

Autistic out.
XxVanitasAngelxX chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
HAHA this is gonna be so random and funny too. Update soon

your friend Kurodarkness14
fire blade chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
HAHAHAHAHAHA! This is defentaly in my top 5 funnyest fics EVER and yeah keep it Ike and Samus
Ikerulesall chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Keep the IkexSamus through entire fic, add maybe other pairs.. IkexSamus is my favorite pairing.