Reviews for Complicated
AndroidKittens chapter 16 . 9/15/2013
VocaloidShippersDesu chapter 16 . 8/23/2013
XxXThatPandaVickyXxX chapter 16 . 4/8/2013
i love it!
Anime-addict-no-1 chapter 16 . 12/29/2012
YAY HAPPY ENDING! This story was really interesting and pretty well written in my opinion. Good job!
Anime-addict-no-1 chapter 8 . 12/29/2012
I would think they're about 15-16 in he story. The kissing was perfectly fine to me just so you know. I would hate living in a house like hers with all those rules /shivers/. Well, it's not like I have total freedom either.
Anime-addict-no-1 chapter 7 . 12/29/2012
Don't worry, I'm forever alone as well. The only experience I have is what my friends have told me. This story is really interesting so far, I can't wait to finish reading!
I wonder who Rin really is...
3xtmegacoaster10 chapter 16 . 12/7/2012
one of the best, yet amazing stories I've ever read! keep up the great work! .
DreamsofDeathandRoses chapter 16 . 12/4/2012
Mukuro234 chapter 16 . 12/4/2012
Hehe very nice ending o a great fan fic
MelancholicVirus chapter 16 . 12/3/2012
Waaaahhh it's kawaii and the plot was cool. :D
Brave Song chapter 15 . 10/24/2012
Epilogue PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE WITH CHERRIES ON TOP! *incert 99999999999999x more begging*
QueenVictoria888 chapter 15 . 10/19/2012
please please please write an epilouge!
XxAngelWithoutWingsxX chapter 15 . 10/19/2012
I think I teared up throught the whole chapter...maybe even cried once or was beautifully written my compliments to the writer
Darkflower123 chapter 15 . 10/19/2012
i'm BEGGING you to write an epilouge. i'ts so sweet!
Ryuunotaki chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
How can anyone expect you to write a decent story if you are note even able to write a decent summary?

And "Sensei" is to be placed after the name, not before. That means "Sensei Luka" is wrong; it should be "Luka-Sensei"

And the first chapter doesn't have a hook at all. You need to write a chapter that will have the reader waiting for more; one that will encourage them to read the story 'till the end.
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