Reviews for A Couple of Mistakes
KaidaKalliDagon chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Its funny and amusing just like the books. I think you should continue. You can always liven up the plot along the way to the pool. I'm curious as to what all the pool of correction will fix such as her magic problem, or if its going to decide that there are other things wrong with her that need fixing. Things like her manners or short it turn her into an over polite stuff-shirt? Will they fave to confront a pool guardian like Mendanbar did?
flowing-starlight chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
A very promising beginning! Please do continue this fic, as I'm really very curious as to what's to happen next. And yes, it most definitely is considered to have a plot...
anne chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
YES this is a plot! what happens next?
Cataclysm chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
Definitely continue!Do you take challenges from other people?
Lady Mage chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
of course you should continue! It is really really really really good!
SoFire chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Hahaha! I love it! It's great. Please continue! .
brightstarinthenight chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
yes you's funny. :P

runtus maximus chapter 1 . 11/29/2004
Yesyesyesyesyes! Continue! Poor Shiara. I've gotten my hair dyed with purple streaks before and everyone was staring at me. How odd.
ktros chapter 1 . 10/22/2004
please continue, i'm interested
Tris the weatherwitch chapter 1 . 3/30/2004
yes, you should. this is a good fic so far, and has quite a bit of potential.
Personis Me-us chapter 1 . 11/21/2003
Please continue. I really liked it. Youuse correct grammar and know how to spell, or at least use a spell checker. This is very is a very nice change from what I usually run into. So please continue. And yes that is a plot...a horrendously unfinished one.
shaindym1 chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
Definately continue; it is a rare authors who knows where to put her apostrophes... i really enjoyed this, especially the silliness.
Oh So Cliche chapter 1 . 8/10/2003
Of course continue it! Anything with Daystar and Shiara in it is good!

Question (for any1 who wants to answer it)

Uh did any1 else notice that you know, Day star was named for the sun? you know like Day Star... oh and you know, sun/son as in Mendanbar's son?

Just a question...

But anyway. This is a great story.

Please continue

the-mint-247 chapter 1 . 7/1/2003
This is really nice, I hope you could continue it...I love it...
Akira Sazanami chapter 1 . 6/2/2003
I must say, I LOVE YOUR STORIES! _ You've got the original writing style and you've got the characters true! Please make more. _
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