|Reviews for Hot Day|
| Skarlettefox chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Niiiiice, he would look nice in a dress...XD
| Motaku1235 chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
A bit fast paced, but otherwise great job! XD
| Ninjabelle chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Aww it's so sweet that you're dedicating it to me! I feel special haha but I really like what you did with the idea, hot pool-side sex is always a good thing right?
A couple of pointers though, since you asked so nicely: your verb tenses change over the course of the story quite a lot, though it's not overly distracting it's something you could work on right? And there were some minor misspellings here and there you should be able to find if you just re-read it carefully once more! I know what it's like when you've checked a story so many times you just stop seeing them and all.
Anyways, it was great to see a nice smutty CxC fic, they definitely deserve it and you did great with the idea! And I'm sure that if you keep on writing and reading lots of other fics you'll get better and better!