|Reviews for Deranged and confused|
| Digidestined Ninja of Sunshine chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
For some odd reason I found this quite adorable. I like how you've written the POVs, all the cursing and stuff. That was hilarious. _
| Battenburg507 chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Hm, the only thing I'm gonna pick you up on is the Sakura bashing, because blatant character bashing's not cool. Apart from that, you've done a decent job with this. Your formatting's a bit wierd, all centred like that, and you've go a few typos in here, but this story's got potential.
Just... try not to bash Sakura too much, and proof read your stuff for typos before you post it. That's my advice
| TigrezzTail chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
That was definitely strange having Sakura after Naruto instead of Sasuke. So, is this more than one chapter or is it one of those metaphysical strange ending types?
| Miss Light Bright chapter 1 . 1/19/2012
Great story so far! Looking forward to more!