|Reviews for Clouded by the Dark Force|
| darth chapter 12 . 1/2/2004
update welcome to the land of weirdos more like it than land of summons the only ones that dont seem weird are cyrus and maybe rydia shes semi weird
| darth chapter 12 . 12/15/2003
wow gleen's sister I wasnt expecting that.
| Wise Gal chapter 8 . 12/15/2002
hey, chrono eter. You prob'ly know why i'm writing this.
anyway, i like your fic; when will you finish it? the twist is fine, so is the plot.
yet i do have some critical points about that.
Why is Magus so-so-cheesy? no, not the right term. well, you know, in the story, he hardly cared about other people's welfare, even in the perfect ending. i mean, usually he's the cold type.
still, i really like your story. i wanna read the next part already.
hey, i'll be making my own original fic. can you help me? i'm new to this kind of thing...
| Chrono Eternal chapter 9 . 10/10/2002
Yes! Thank you bobb for giving me motivation! Now I can probably get the next chapter up by October 12! Hurray! Thanks! Seing your review was all I needed!
| bobb chapter 9 . 10/10/2002
Hey, good chapter!
i just started reading this last night, and finished it this morning, and i thought it was excelent! i hope you can keepwriting the chapters though, because i looked and you havent updated it for a while, please update! i wanna know what happens in the next chapter! good story! keep it up, i wonder if crono and marle and lucca get revived...
| Nova Strike chapter 8 . 9/6/2002
WOOHOO! Atleast someone remembers something! Now we gotta get a certain Frog back in. *Bricked by everyone* Owieee...
| Kit Thespian chapter 7 . 8/15/2002
YIkes...cool... Please continue!
| Mario Maniac chapter 6 . 8/15/2002
Don't worry Kit! Marle and Crono died in Crono Trigger, but they came back, now didn't they? And about your little hunch about the romance in the story, you are very right indeed.
| Kit Thespian chapter 6 . 8/14/2002
NO! NO! Don't kill Magus! Oh drat, past my bedtime! I'll read it tommorrow...
| Alex chapter 1 . 8/7/2002
that was very good. i trully think you have a very good story going here. Keep writing.
| Chrono Eternal chapter 4 . 7/24/2002
Hey everyone, I wrote this story. I'm glad that you all like it. Umm...for those of you that were wondering Chapter 5: The Makamars is the best chapter left and it's finished! Except when I tried posting it earlier, wherever I hit enter there was just a space. It should be up by August! Thanks for supporting my story!
| Reader chapter 4 . 6/2/2002
The story is great so far. I usually plan out my stories before I write them. It helps me to know how a story you write your next chapter you might want to plan it out a bit. That way you'll always know what the next chapter is about.
| Reader chapter 2 . 6/1/2002
This is good, especially for a Lavos returns plot. Keep it up!
| Kit Thespian chapter 4 . 6/1/2002
GASP! What's going to happen? I'm still waiting for that question to be answered you know. hint, hint...
| Kit Thespian chapter 3 . 5/30/2002
This rocks! You have to write more! Is the Crono/Marle romance all that there is? Or is there another couple? hint, hint...