Reviews for Obiwan and the Path of the Jedi |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the story. But what a mean ending |
![]() ![]() Veri n1c3kmdst0riu3 |
![]() ![]() That was AMAZING! That ending was gripping and so suspenseful! Please PLEASE all more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing so far! Nice plot! Can't wait for the next chapters :) |
![]() ![]() more please |
![]() ![]() Interesting story! :-) Just a quick question... change your email and forget about this story? :-( I would definitely like to read more! What's going to happen to Obi-Wan? Is Qui-Gon all right?! Help? |
![]() ![]() Isn't this finished? Where is the rest of it? IT'S SO GOOD I MUST KNOW! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! Obi-Wan! Cliffhanger! I accuse you of a serious crime known as a CLIFFHANGER! Haha :) Can't wait until the next update! |
![]() ![]() Such a great story! Why no more updates? |
![]() ![]() ![]() More paragraphs will make it an easier read but otherwise well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this; it has a good plot and I especially liked the insight into Obi-Wan's childhood. Update soon! As in right now! (please) |
![]() ![]() O.M.G. luv this story. Keep writing. Do you like pokemon? I do. I also like star wars. I think we have that in common. coolio. I like the fact that Qui-gon is dieing. Peace out. -thorn :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent début, vivement le chapitre suivant ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thankyou for the double update, and I hope you had a nice break. Uh oh, poor Obi. If a member of his own family is behind what is going on, this mission will become hard on the teen- especially as he hasn't got Qui-Gon to help him, after a failed attack aimed at the padawan O.o I think there is something more to this mission than meets the eye, and I can't wait to see where you go with this :) - Athar |