I liked the story. But what a mean ending

Veri n1c3kmdst0riu3

That was AMAZING! That ending was gripping and so suspenseful! Please PLEASE all more!

This is amazing so far! Nice plot! Can't wait for the next chapters :)

more please

Interesting story! :-) Just a quick question... change your email and forget about this story? :-( I would definitely like to read more! What's going to happen to Obi-Wan? Is Qui-Gon all right?! Help?

Isn't this finished? Where is the rest of it? IT'S SO GOOD I MUST KNOW!

NO! Obi-Wan! Cliffhanger! I accuse you of a serious crime known as a CLIFFHANGER! Haha :) Can't wait until the next update!

Such a great story! Why no more updates?

More paragraphs will make it an easier read but otherwise well done.

I really like this; it has a good plot and I especially liked the insight into Obi-Wan's childhood. Update soon! As in right now! (please)

O.M.G. luv this story. Keep writing. Do you like pokemon? I do. I also like star wars. I think we have that in common. coolio. I like the fact that Qui-gon is dieing. Peace out.

-thorn :)

excellent début, vivement le chapitre suivant !

Love it!

Thankyou for the double update, and I hope you had a nice break.

Uh oh, poor Obi. If a member of his own family is behind what is going on, this mission will become hard on the teen- especially as he hasn't got Qui-Gon to help him, after a failed attack aimed at the padawan O.o

I think there is something more to this mission than meets the eye, and I can't wait to see where you go with this :)

- Athar