This is amazing so far! Nice plot! Can't wait for the next chapters :)

more please

Interesting story! :-) Just a quick question... change your email and forget about this story? :-( I would definitely like to read more! What's going to happen to Obi-Wan? Is Qui-Gon all right?! Help?

Isn't this finished? Where is the rest of it? IT'S SO GOOD I MUST KNOW!

NO! Obi-Wan! Cliffhanger! I accuse you of a serious crime known as a CLIFFHANGER! Haha :) Can't wait until the next update!

Such a great story! Why no more updates?

More paragraphs will make it an easier read but otherwise well done.

I really like this; it has a good plot and I especially liked the insight into Obi-Wan's childhood. Update soon! As in right now! (please)

O.M.G. luv this story. Keep writing. Do you like pokemon? I do. I also like star wars. I think we have that in common. coolio. I like the fact that Qui-gon is dieing. Peace out.

-thorn :)

excellent début, vivement le chapitre suivant !

Love it!

Thankyou for the double update, and I hope you had a nice break.

Uh oh, poor Obi. If a member of his own family is behind what is going on, this mission will become hard on the teen- especially as he hasn't got Qui-Gon to help him, after a failed attack aimed at the padawan O.o

I think there is something more to this mission than meets the eye, and I can't wait to see where you go with this :)

- Athar

Love it!

Love it!

I love this so far...do keep going.