I want to read more your chapter is good keep at it. I want to know what happens next.

P.S. if you have time take a look at my story Rays of Hope thank you so much on this chapter.

That's adorable I love how this story is going so great so far excellent job.

It getting better keep it up I'm enjoying it onward.

I like this short but simple thanks I will continue onward. I'm adding you across the board I like this idea.

I see promise, but it's not exactly 'stunning.' I will check back in when I expect things to get dirtier.

I cant remember if you said all your chapters where going to be short so non of that. The only other thing that bothers me is the lack of details , but so far still good reading

Once again good chapter. If you can make the chapters a bit long and describe more of the scenes that would be great and yes this is Blood Soldier

Tad short but still good

i am a very fast reader [like pinkie when she talks]

and i have to say...in like the 30 seconds it took to read this i was amased at how well it was written

This is an amazing first chapter