|Reviews for Bouquet|
| BeforeThePrologue chapter 4 . 11/25/2013
Beautiful, love Raven so much!
| animestarz96 chapter 12 . 10/12/2013
Liking this:) yo u don't have to be christian to wait, but the reason ur giving here os pretty much the reason the bible says, if ur religious its only because God says, but if u are a follower of christ it is the reason God give which is because it is a gift that should be savored for a man and a woman who are married. I beleive there is a difference between a religious person and a person who has a actual christian life. Sweet Robin(although, yes i know his reason is not a "religious" one, he is still sweet) ur stories always awesome :D
| Puckabrinaluver chapter 29 . 9/24/2013
Hahahaha! That last part made me laugh really hard! I loved the whole thing!
| Puckabrinaluver chapter 5 . 9/13/2013
Hahaha, laughed so hard at that major trolling!
| Starlight chapter 29 . 8/16/2013
That was magnificent! Glorious! Ooo it was most enjoyable to read . you truly are a talented writer :) I do wish you would have in included the reaction from the titans but that is okay . I ablsolutely loved it!
| flygirl4271 chapter 18 . 7/27/2013
"If I do another chapter at all" Writes 11 more.
| flygirl4271 chapter 5 . 7/24/2013
Oh god dammit woman.
| bluexxxcarnation chapter 14 . 7/23/2013
so I've been reading mostly ALL of your fanfictions and I find them all wonderful (I suppose I should have reviewed all of them... Hehe sorry) but I would like to say that I truly TRULY appreciate your bits of advice at the closing of each chapter. While I'm at the age where I understand and have experienced most of your warnings (of course there ate still concepts that i have yet to experience) I appreciate the elaborated insights you provide us. I know you are mostly clarifying anything people would find controversial in your stories but I find it nice, as if you're looking out for your readers.
Soooo yeah haha you're awesome.
| junebird28 chapter 29 . 7/7/2013
You're probably sensing a pattern now, but I loved thus one too. Cute and fluffy. I missed the other titans in the touch series, so that was nice to see. Loved the "jingle bells, Batman smells" part. BB's so cheeky :D I liked the T rating for this, but I missed a lot of the angst and stuff. Sex scenes I could do without, I usually skip over them in for your other stories (I'm one of those rare few you spoke of). I'm not surprised that you're an author. Your writing is fantastic and I adore how real your story lines are. Makes the characters come to life. I'm very curious about your books though. I'd love to read them and I'd like to see what they're about! Anyways, loved this!
| gfcf14 chapter 11 . 6/11/2013
You almost got it! Mas (or Menos)'s line should have been "No hables!" or "No hablen!" since that would be plural, or even "No grites!/No griten!" to tell them not to scream. The next one could've simply been "No me hagas ir alla!"
| Teen Tyrant chapter 29 . 6/3/2013
Well, I've been reading this story off and on for nearly a year now, and I've got to say you've done a fantastic job. The realistic and adult complications Robin and Starfire face in this story are completely believable and the concept surrounding the flowers was very nice.
I also liked the BB/Rae side-story, though I felt there could have been more resolution, but overall, nothing wrong there. Some of the best ways to write BB/Rae is to plant the seed and let the reader make up their mind as to how it grows. You did something similar at the end in regards to how Robin and Starfire take their marriage home, so it's a nice usage of an important method used for many good stories.
I did have one complaint- I am thoroughly disappointed that you went with the Cyborg/Sara and BumbleBee/Herald route. I hate how the comics brought in Sara just to stick Cyborg with someone, and I know it was done only to convey a social message about interracial pairings. I also know that Bee ends up with Herald in the mainstream comics, but the animate TT franchise has defied that enough times to throw that out completely. Cyborg and Bee from the animated series have a great chemistry and should be the ones who end up with each other. That is my only complaint about this story, that you did not take that route.
Anyway, great job, and I'm off to read its sequel.
| GalanthaDreams chapter 29 . 5/4/2013
The amount of joy I experienced when reading this story is beyond words. I cried, I laughed-there was nothing more I could have asked for.
| Storylover Vodhr- Dux Ducis chapter 29 . 4/26/2013
Awww... Why not just make a one shot with their reactions? It's such a vital part of the story!
| Electricboa chapter 29 . 4/14/2013
This was kind of a surprising story to me, in that it more followed Robin and Starfire as a normal couple. The situations could (mostly) have happened to anyone, so seeing them thrust into it made for an entertaining story. I like the interactions between the boys and girls at the campsite, it's nice to characters like Jinx, Bumblebee, Kid Flash, Speedy, etc. get roles. I was thrown by Sarah, though. I'd never read the comics, so her appearance was kind of sudden and unexplained for me. Making Robin's hesitation non-religious was, I think, a good idea. Better to avoid the inevitable ideological clash and keep it more focused on the story. There were some chapters that I missed the flower reference, but it was a nice theme, especially reading early on how you'd only do one more chapter. Then, checking the chapter list and see it's only a quarter of the way finished.
That being said, you've got to give us the Titans' reactions, that's just begging to be written, especially when Cyborg tried groomicide for eloping.
| Kryalla Orchid chapter 27 . 4/3/2013
Guest: It's possible to be allergic to fish and not shellfish. "Seafood" is a generic allergy, people would say to just incorporate everything rather than getting into specifics. It would get rather bogged down if Robin had started to list all the types of fish he might have a reaction to, asking if there was seafood in the soup covers everything and lets him know quickly if there was any sort of possible contaminent so he could act.