Reviews for Lips Like Liquorice
haylE15 chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
The title remind me of a song...but i don't know if it was on purpose.
As for the short story, it was sweet but really too short x) even for just one moment i'd have liked to read a bit more...but thanks for this
MadHatterBellatrix10 chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
Excellent Gamma, I think you should continue this. The ending leaves SO much more to be desired :)
Inkfire chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
This was really sweet, though GinnyLuna isn't really my type, lol. Luna's full-mouth speech made me die laughing, and I like the way you described her mannerisms and her smile. The whole wand-eating (oh God. Oh. Never MIND.) was very well described - it was clear that Ginny didn't have a clue where this was going, and it was pretty adorable. Luna's calm and innocence were very well pictured as well. I love the way you evoked Ginny's feelings after the kiss, and the sweetness that's left on her tongue… It was quite delightful!