Reviews for Beautiful Nightmare
Emeraldinhereyes chapter 18 . 8/26/2016
I like the psychological aspect and yet find it odd you ended their story on such a seemingly happy part when they just got told Alfred is Arthur's drug of choice. I could see you doing a wonderfully fucked up ending, one where Arthur rips up the card, pulls Alfred in for a kiss, and basically does the "she doesn't know what she's talking about, I don't need anyone but you baby we're all we have" type yandere thing where Alfred is either kind of freaked out but goes with it because he doesn't want Arthur to flip or he becomes possessive, his hero complex having been Fed too much... Oh well, just letting you know it seemed too pleasantly fluffy at the end there but still a nice story
Emeraldinhereyes chapter 11 . 8/22/2016
I've only read through chapter ten but this kind of reminds me of the relationship I had with my ex. It was funded on mutual lust, my hero complex (she was like Arthur in that she needed to be saved and I was like Alfred), and lastly jealousy on my part (of other people wanting her). Our relationship was Rocky, manipulative, verbally abusive, mentally abusive, physically abusive in the sense of physical neglect (aka she wouldn't touch me rather than hitting each other), and just all around unhealthy. We also had a two year age difference which is huge if you're both under seventeen. In the end I guess I just realized that I wanted to save someone who was drowning but she ripped off my life vest and had me drown with her because she didn't want to float, she wanted to sink. Despite that I actually like this story, although they do seem to have quite a few red flags I think (desperately hope) they work things out and don't become too attached in their misery
Emeraldinhereyes chapter 6 . 8/21/2016
Oh dear Jesus I said I wasn't going to cry but chapter 6 broke me
Let'sDoOurBest chapter 11 . 7/13/2016
Ooooooh excited for the last stretch.
You really are supportive of the LGBTQ and everything in between people, aren't ya?
Congratulations.
Somehow, I feel like that Anthony scene was off somehow. It's OK for this story, but somehow it felt unusual...
Let'sDoOurBest chapter 5 . 7/13/2016
Thank you
Let'sDoOurBest chapter 4 . 7/13/2016
That was so cute!
But now...
AAARGH I WANNA HURRY UP AND GET TO THE HAPPY ENDING!
Let'sDoOurBest chapter 2 . 7/12/2016
It's good)))
I just feel sorry for Arthur.
JayandNya4evr chapter 18 . 6/23/2016
Wow, such a great story! I found it in the afternoon, and here I am at 11 at night finishing it! I didn't expect I'd be reading an 18 chapter long story, when I was looking around for some fluffy one-shots about my favorite couple in Hetalia, and a well written one at that! Thanks for this enjoyable story! C:
JayandNya4evr chapter 17 . 6/23/2016
Man, with these few chapters talking about cooking and knives, I just knew Arthur would cut himself dang. But ya know, those pesky buggers really stick ya! I've cut myself on a pair of scissors when making a crafty thing (cuz I do that chiz yay) and MAN did it bleed.

But these guys are just so precious! :)
JayandNya4evr chapter 16 . 6/23/2016
The poor child! But glad the other football players are being so nice now (and helpful too wow)! :)
JayandNya4evr chapter 15 . 6/23/2016
Repetition actually gives stories such volume, and I love it! Yaay! :)
JayandNya4evr chapter 14 . 6/23/2016
Sooo...they are so cute...

And poor Alfred, nooo!

But then Arthur got his voice back, yay (and dear lord Alfred don't you dare break up with you precious bae) and I'm sure all this amazing fluff has given me so many cavities now lel! :)
JayandNya4evr chapter 13 . 6/23/2016
Aw, they so cute! :3
JayandNya4evr chapter 12 . 6/23/2016
Yes! Scottie is such a sweetheart, and dang, Peter is there too? Nice! :)
JayandNya4evr chapter 11 . 6/23/2016
How rude! But good for Alfred to stand up to that jerk! (Kinda funny tho when he mentioned Alfred's possible kink for accents, lel.) :3
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