Did Quatre recognize him? I'm not used to Quatre not liking Duo, that was original lol

Where do you even find these challenges? I'm not complaining, as this is the 3-4 time I have read this one shot. I miss you and your regular updates. I hope your new kid is doing well.

Lol, poor scarred Heero

SWEET!

It’s hard to write funny. *Really* hard. I laughed. A lot. (Duo and the banana? Priceless!)

I really, really like this. *grin* Weirds me out to think of Quatre lusting after Heero though (that is one pairing I just cannot imagine). But it was really well-written and I loved the plot.

Ok sorry I had to review this not only because it was awesome... But also because I nearly choked when I read the challenge at the bottom. God was that funny! XD Great fic all the way to the end! :)

so i finally got around to reading this (OMG, right?) and i (surprise) loved it! the dynamic between duo and heero was lovingly, adorably hilarious, and while i admit i don't completely like the "quatre doesn't like duo" thing in the middle, the 1x4xR threeway was very funny.

sorry it took so long to get around to reading this; life's been suckish.

looking forward to updates!

Total and complete AWESOMENESS! Thank you for posting it!

For me, the hands-down favorite line was:

Duo smiled.

"Porn would be nice."

I could totally imagine a sort of devilish grin with that. A puckish expression on his face, as he's yanking Wufei's chain. And yet, he might not be kidding. No wonder Wufei ran for the hills.

Anyhow, sorry for the late commentary. It's been a long couple of weeks. Really long. I'm still catching up on everything. And having trouble sleeping through the night...so I'm tired and brain-dead.

But this was fun. you met all the challenges so very well. We used to play a game (I am SO dating myself here) called Mad Libs, where you filled in words randomly (like: color, type of fish, exclamation...) and then someone read the paragraphs where your random replies were plugged in. It was hilarious, and this challenge reminds me of it a bit...banana on a windowsill? I'd have been lost on that one.

Anyhow, great job of completing the challenge. And I'll try to do better and review in a timely manner next time! -Snow

Oh. My. God. I have never laughed...well I have...so hard in my life! This was great!

...You make Heero do things that shouldn't be done, and still make it look good! Now I'm trying to picture Heero in a scuba suit... x)

Great work as always Clara my dear ;D

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Awe that was cute. And you met the challgene very nicely. Interesting a perspective with Quatre and Relena both pinning for Heero... Can't wait to read your updates for Lost Dreams, A Very Dark Corner, and most espsically Deviant!

Just what I needed, an angsty love story with a happy ending. Loved it! Thanks for sharing.

That was amazing! Happy Birthday to your Beta!