Even as the Story is quite "old" now I would like to review it - as I just found it today (since I update my old work for a friend of mine and so started reading stuff again). And since I liked it would only be fair to let you know.
I find the Challenge was quite hard but you solved it perfectly - I loved the Idea of Quatre with a goatee :) - So nice! And jes, the mental image was "disturbing"

Very sweet! Lovely story, thank you so much for posting it! This had me laughing a lot, even the description for the story ('yes, just them, no threesomes this time') made me snort before I even clicked the link And the fluff 'warnings' Haha _ Also highly entertained by Relena and Quatre's lusting, and so glad that Duo got to enjoy Heero's wetsuit-clad behind in the end (as well as a promise of Heero to join him on Mars! YAY!) I also particularly enjoyed Heero's curious observations of Trowa when he was interacting with the mysterious man in black, and Heero's puzzling about their easy body language and apparent camraderie before he knew Duo's identity. It was an interesting way to show the close bond between them and knowledge Heero had of Trowa from their bond over the years :)
Thanks again for sharing this sweet story!

Did Quatre recognize him? I'm not used to Quatre not liking Duo, that was original lol

Where do you even find these challenges? I'm not complaining, as this is the 3-4 time I have read this one shot. I miss you and your regular updates. I hope your new kid is doing well.

Lol, poor scarred Heero

SWEET!

It’s hard to write funny. *Really* hard. I laughed. A lot. (Duo and the banana? Priceless!)

I really, really like this. *grin* Weirds me out to think of Quatre lusting after Heero though (that is one pairing I just cannot imagine). But it was really well-written and I loved the plot.

Ok sorry I had to review this not only because it was awesome... But also because I nearly choked when I read the challenge at the bottom. God was that funny! XD Great fic all the way to the end! :)

so i finally got around to reading this (OMG, right?) and i (surprise) loved it! the dynamic between duo and heero was lovingly, adorably hilarious, and while i admit i don't completely like the "quatre doesn't like duo" thing in the middle, the 1x4xR threeway was very funny.

sorry it took so long to get around to reading this; life's been suckish.

looking forward to updates!

Total and complete AWESOMENESS! Thank you for posting it!

For me, the hands-down favorite line was:

Duo smiled.

"Porn would be nice."

I could totally imagine a sort of devilish grin with that. A puckish expression on his face, as he's yanking Wufei's chain. And yet, he might not be kidding. No wonder Wufei ran for the hills.

Anyhow, sorry for the late commentary. It's been a long couple of weeks. Really long. I'm still catching up on everything. And having trouble sleeping through the night...so I'm tired and brain-dead.

But this was fun. you met all the challenges so very well. We used to play a game (I am SO dating myself here) called Mad Libs, where you filled in words randomly (like: color, type of fish, exclamation...) and then someone read the paragraphs where your random replies were plugged in. It was hilarious, and this challenge reminds me of it a bit...banana on a windowsill? I'd have been lost on that one.

Anyhow, great job of completing the challenge. And I'll try to do better and review in a timely manner next time! -Snow

Oh. My. God. I have never laughed...well I have...so hard in my life! This was great!

...You make Heero do things that shouldn't be done, and still make it look good! Now I'm trying to picture Heero in a scuba suit... x)

Great work as always Clara my dear ;D

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Awe that was cute. And you met the challgene very nicely. Interesting a perspective with Quatre and Relena both pinning for Heero... Can't wait to read your updates for Lost Dreams, A Very Dark Corner, and most espsically Deviant!