Reviews for Elementary
1Styx and Stones1 chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
I like this. It's a new take on an over-done topic (which I have guiltily partaken in, truth be told).

One tip - you should start a new paragraph every time a new person speaks. For example:

Tony said, "blah blah blah"

Ziva said, "blah blah blah"

It makes everything easier to read that way. You're doing a good job otherwise. Keep it up!
TENAHI chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
personaly i prefer ncis high school stories over any other kind. i dont actually like ones where there reallly young but if in the story they grow up and tony and ziva are like best friends for a while before they date that would be cool. i think i will read yhe story any way update soon!
june445 chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
Hey love it

post next chapter soon plllleeeeaaaassseee
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