|Reviews for A Better Tomorrow|
| LivingALittle chapter 63 . 4/11
Oh my gosh, I loved this so much! I cried so much though, oh, Evil Author. But tears are good for the soul I suppose. Anyhow, I loved it and can't wait to read more of your writings.
| it's simply me n you chapter 20 . 11/27/2016
Gosh, this is emotional.
James is a hateful, vile thing. Can't wait to see him get what he deserves,
I'm so glad that Bella is opening up to Esme & Jasper
| Guest chapter 5 . 10/31/2016
A good chapter. Maria's hope for her son is understandable. I'd want my child to find true happiness too. Bella standing up for herself and offering to leave to ease tension was good. It's good to see her speaking up.
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/31/2016
Great chapter. Now to see where things go from here.
| MelDina chapter 21 . 9/22/2016
| MelDina chapter 20 . 9/22/2016
How sweet. It's good they talked.
| MelDina chapter 19 . 9/22/2016
This makes me understand Jasper more. Good chapter.
| MelDina chapter 18 . 9/22/2016
Wow good chapter
| MelDina chapter 17 . 9/22/2016
Despite the interruption named Alice that was a sweet ending
| MelDina chapter 16 . 9/22/2016
As much as I hate to admit it it was good to meet James so I can see inside his crazy head
| MelDina chapter 15 . 9/22/2016
Another good one!
| MelDina chapter 14 . 9/22/2016
Love the chapter!
| MelDina chapter 13 . 9/22/2016
I want them together. I think they will be good for each other.
| MelDina chapter 12 . 9/22/2016
I love this! Great chapter.
| MelDina chapter 11 . 9/22/2016
Nice. Could be the start of something good