|Reviews for Lullaby|
| hoagie chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
I have to be honest with you I'm not a fan of Jake/Hannah. It's not that I'm against the pairing it's just that I don't see it and it doesn't really interest me. I would have preferred that you put all of your focus on Tom and Bethany instead but that's just my personal preference and not an actual criticism since this was well written like everything you do. The part with all the kids sitting by the lake really felt like a scene from the movie to me and the conversation between Tom and Bethany before they go to sleep felt like a perfect continuation of the conversation they had just after Ricky left; you nailed the feeling of awkward warmth between in that part.
| Erza Fullbuster LOVE chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
I love the couple TomxBethany