Reviews for Passion Dissolved in the Wine
TheRawrCreature chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
A very good story and very detailed...
However, I don't think Zoisite was ready for that sort of a relationship.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/9/2012
A rose in bud, bloom... those words got a new meaning in my head;)
Princess Gaea chapter 2 . 2/29/2012
That was a fantastic story. The plot and emotion behind it were so well done.

The only thing I'd suggest is getting a proof-reader for your English versions, since it's not your first language, and there were frequent grammar mistakes (mostly verb tense and word order). Of course, I've met native speakers with worse grammar, so you're doing quite well. Good luck with your studies!
starchilds chapter 2 . 2/6/2012
Wow that was stimulating. The raw passion of Kunzite was overpowering. Zoisite was pulled along in the flow of emotions. He may not have been quite ready but he loves Kunzite. In the end they were able to form the emotional and physical bond they both needed. Thank you, Starchilds
starchilds chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
Kunzite is compleately captivated by Zoisite. But Zoisite has no idea. Escourting Kunzite to his room could be complicated. Even though Zoisite cares for Kunzite is he ready. Thanks, Starchilds