Reviews for A Beautiful Lie
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2017
Great plot. A few grammar issues, but overall it's really good!
Lemgoerin chapter 16 . 3/7/2014
It is such a beautiful story! I really enjoyed it. Thanks :)
chlollifan84 chapter 16 . 11/12/2013
Great chapter, great story! Love it!
Mark-Owen chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
That's a lovely ending you give us there. Both the final part and the additional scenes were full of fluff which was much needed after all the drama Chloe and Oliver have gone through. And of course their daughter is a cute kid (how couldn't she be?) and needs a lot of surveillance lol!
Congratulations on another story completion. Let's hope to see you posting again soon.
Hellzz-on-Earth chapter 16 . 11/8/2013
Awwwww I'm so happy to read this update, but sad that it's completed.
I've truly enjoyed assisting where you needed me too and just reading your amazing work for Chlollie.
Loved the deleted scene. I can totally see Ollie putting the pink stuff back and grabbing more green outfits for his little girl. lol
Thank you again for sharing.
Guest chapter 16 . 11/6/2013
Enjoyed this!
Guest chapter 16 . 11/6/2013
Great story pls keep writing
Guest chapter 16 . 11/6/2013
Epic story and some nice fluff at the end
Hildolfr chapter 15 . 8/28/2013
No all the stories I'm reading are coming to an end. :(
malugargula chapter 15 . 8/26/2013
Awwwwww that was so sweet
I'm so glad things are better for them
JamesTKent chapter 15 . 8/25/2013
I just read the whole thing up till now . . . nicely done, even if the POV changes at dates got a little confusing.
Mark-Owen chapter 15 . 8/25/2013
It's nice to see this story coming to an end soon. And the fluffy chapter was wonderful after all the trauma Lex and Lionel caused. I sure hope you'll give us another story when this one's over (sequel or not), be sure that I'll read you!
Hellzz-on-Earth chapter 15 . 8/25/2013
Another great update as always Aisha.
Love how Chloe and Ollie take care of each other and are so in love.
I couldn't stop laughing at how Chloe won the decision to name Baby Queen. lol
Love how she made the finally choice when she got a smile from the baby.
Such a sweet moment for The Queen Family.
I don't want it to end, but on the other hand I can't wait to read how it does.
Thank you for the update and for the props.
Happy writing.
Guest chapter 15 . 8/25/2013
Welcome Baby Queen! Glad to see you haven't given up on this story!
Charley Gurl chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
I have just finsihed rereading this fic and thought I should tell you how great this really is. I hope that you will be back soon to update it.
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