Reviews for Miranda's girl
sybil 013 chapter 9 . 8/1/2019
This is a terrific story and I'm glad to find it even at this late date..I'm sure you finished this long ago. If I were to even critique it my only pause would be ...why does Andrea flip out and act like a dog in heat every time Miranda in near? Is Andy that emotionally destitute? has she never noticed Miranda before, is this all new to her, does she have some kind of 12 year hangup with other beautiful women, why all the crapping her pants every time Miranda looks at her? Seems very angsty to me if not childish.
Coming late to the party I'll assume the whole story has this Andrea with heavy breathing and diarrhea of the emotions...Lovely story though.

Jena~
sybil 013 chapter 6 . 5/12/2019
Wow, Miranda finally made it to Hooker status, that dress has to be a streetwalkers dream come true with Andy as her pimp.
sybil 013 chapter 7 . 5/12/2019
well again I have to say this is a remarkable story the language alone is totally awesome. I missed seeing the carpet muchers but heck that's what seconds are for. Andy hasn't improved her begging yet, but her apologies seems on the mark. I love the way she's demands Miranda to give her attention, practice makes perfect...Andy also is slamming her family too. She is almost a perfect mindless, rude daughter. This writing is a new standard and appropriate for Runway.
sybil 013 chapter 5 . 5/12/2019
Will you have a fuck chapter, something for Andrea?
sybil 013 chapter 4 . 5/12/2019
Poor Andy fat and now a tubby trying to have sex with her Queen Miranda as if Miranda would even soil herself with Andy excess flab. At least Andy has a great vocabulary. I was rather hoping for more inventive language with Nigel, but I think he now realizes Andy it's hung up on Miranda and is openly seeking a social disease. Andy has been fortunate so far Thompson Christain hasn't given one yet and Jacqueline Folett hasn't so maybe Miranda will! Let's hope she gets lucky. I be watching and reading for new foul mouthed people, simpletons that can't speak correctly so they curse. Keep up the amazing work this story is unique.
sybil 013 chapter 3 . 5/12/2019
Your updates needn't be on time it's amazing your can update at all. I love your vocabulary, the "shit, shit, shit" your have Andrea spouting is quite colorful but I'm sure she would never blurt out off colored words in public unless in this story she is just a rude imbecile. So Andrea is now a size 6, that's like a size 14 in fashion and she must really be a balloon now, wattling in 4 or 5 inch Jimmy Choo's...lol. You can really write comedy better then most. I hope Miranda doesn't mind Andrea stalking her and occasionally copping a feel, the elevator scene was a riot.
sybil 013 chapter 2 . 5/12/2019
Just discovered this great story good luck and enjoy ...
eelojnil chapter 30 . 8/2/2018
I have enjoyed this story immensely.

I am interested to know what Stephen found on Wayne...any chance you will tell?
Kelly chapter 30 . 2/1/2018
Omg I love this story...oh wish it was not over but thank you that was a wonderful journey
rndm chapter 22 . 12/3/2017
In almost every fanfic Stephen is a total ass. Kudos for making him a good step dad and mature person.
rndm chapter 30 . 12/3/2017
Great story, excellent characterization of Miranda.
I loved the joke about "Death Becomes Her".
Wonderful writing for a not native speaker.
FaBbEr0oZ chapter 30 . 2/16/2017
Really glad things worked out! My heart nearly broke for Andy. Excellent story
karla05 chapter 30 . 10/25/2016
This was so good !
Artemis99117 chapter 4 . 7/27/2016
Loving the story so far
Guest chapter 30 . 1/17/2016
Very well written and truly enjoyable story. You still writing?
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