Reviews for John's Bad Day
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2016
Not the most orthodox, but its still one of the most sweetness things to do!
ReadtoRelax chapter 1 . 6/18/2016
Poor John, pain he endured for no good reason. Glad the police got a tip. I wonder where was Finch? Glad Joss was able to give John a hand figurative and literally. Nice ending.
MerriWyllow chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
The emotional resonance between Reese and Carter in this piece is blazing bright light. And then it gets all hot and bothered yet managing to maintain it's tether to reality (the secondary reality of the show). I won't ask for a sequel to this story, I just want you to write more stories - pretty please with sugar on top?
kuntrygurl93 chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
You should do a sequel
ImaginaryNumber chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
I like the writing style, and especially like the beginning of the story; very insightful. Don't think the end was quite in character for Carter, but it did made me grin.
DeliciousSin chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Well done...I enjoyed it very much!
FashionableRaid chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
well at least John's bad day had a "happy ending"!lol

good job! :))
odalys-ortiz chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Well at least John's day ended better then it startedXD Great work:D
persnikitty5 chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
well i certainly wasn't expecting that ending lol! great fic!
DehMD chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
MY GOD! I loved it! I really didn't expect that kind of ending, but it turned out wonderfully amazing! Congrats. You could right the day after by the way...
DawnCandace chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
I really enjoyed this.
Evesgreenleaf chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
John's bad day had an up ending. I do wonder why it took finch so long to engineer a rescue. Liked your story