Reviews for Stand and look pretty
KIM chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
I think this is an interesting idea, but the lack of punctuation and grammar makes it very difficult to read... I would try to get it checked, and that may encourage more readers.
Any chapter 3 . 7/22/2012
Big load of crap
kiwimoonelmo chapter 3 . 7/19/2012
I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw this.I adore Lewis and funnily enough read your story yesterday.I was a little miffed to see it only had two chapters because it was so GOOD and now here you are with chapter 3 and what a chapter it was.I hope you post more of your brilliant story very soon.
History101 chapter 2 . 6/10/2012
Interesting start, we need too read more! We need to find out what happens next!
lynnemezzo chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
This has a good start, but it's hard to read because of all the grammar and spelling errors. Could you find a beta to proofread it for yu?
Bralker Stalker chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
this was awesome. Aside from a few spelling errors very well done.