Reviews for How Mark Garner Felt
EVERanOptimist chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
Hey! I can't believe you haven't got any other reviews for this but i guess it's not suprising considering there's only like 20 fics. I was suprised by that too. :P Anyway, I really like the idea you have going here. I've always loved reading other characters views of things and this is no exception. I especially love the whole brotherly love thing going on here. I do think that you could have expanded more here. I like the beginning("Just anotherordinary day")but I would have liked it better if there was more of a descirption on how Mark felt about Luke being gone. I also thought it would have been cool to see how Mark felt about Smits and on how Luke had changed. However, I think that this was a really good story and I especially LOVE the last line. "The family hung on to his every word." I think it really speaks for how much they missed him and love him. Sorry that this review is so long!:P But anyway, thanks for sharing this! :)