Reviews for Instinct
Guest chapter 50 . 8/11/2018
I liked the beginning but you changed this to a drabble fic at the end. Felt like it was a bit rushed and didn't explain motivations very well. I wish you'd go back and add more substance to the end of the story.
Also, a prologue is an intro to the story. It gives you an idea of what the story is about. An epilogue is at the end of a story, it concludes or summarizes your fic. That should be what your last chapter is titled.
Guest chapter 50 . 9/16/2016
What absolute shite. And how pathetic that Tarbecca recommended this on failing site ADF recently. But perfect.

Did you really think such a crap ending was any kind of triumph, requiring exclamation points in your last A/N?

How sad.
aAnnalise chapter 50 . 6/20/2015
Very disappointed with the ending was rushed
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Fantasy0506 chapter 36 . 2/8/2015
Gotta love a bad Jacob and a sleezy James!
Fantasy0506 chapter 22 . 2/8/2015
Loving your story!

Have I misunderstood? Pupils contract when the light is increased. They dilate in darkness, in shock or brain damage.
dissapointed chapter 50 . 12/31/2014
I was dissapointed with the ending. I loved the first 45 chapters or so but the end was cheaply resolved.
Louise chapter 50 . 12/14/2014
Total let down, that ending was rushed.
jadedghost22 chapter 50 . 12/12/2014
This is finished? You did not even write about how she got away from James and Jacob.
pinklady34 chapter 50 . 12/12/2014
Wow...it's finished? No future takes?
debslmac chapter 50 . 12/12/2014
loved this :)
mommymac0508 chapter 50 . 12/12/2014
I loved it thank you
2muchtrouble chapter 50 . 12/12/2014
That was fun to read. Hope you do more.
Midnight Cougar chapter 50 . 12/12/2014
Sweet ending.

Congrats on completing this. Thanks. I've enjoyed reading it.
angelinab01926 chapter 49 . 12/11/2014
Awwwwwwww
5sec0nds0fsummer chapter 49 . 12/11/2014
Awww this chapter makes me smile!
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