|Reviews for Choice|
| scorchedtrees chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
This was a great look into Zuko's head and his inner turmoil! Great job. :3
| redeemthefallen chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
D'AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. You my friend,are an amazing author!
| SaucePear chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
This is nice, I agree that Zuko wouldn't ever feel like he has been able to choose the important things for himself. And I also agree that the choice between Uncle and Azula wouldn't feel like a choice either. Because even if he did choose to stay, she would hunt him and probably kill him.
I like your writing style, feels very stream-of-conciousness. Very pleasant to read.
Thanks for sharing this!
| Spiffswishy chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Awesome oneshot! Perfect thing to do a oneshot about!
| Spry chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Don't worry- there's no need to be insanely nervous, because this is AWESOME!
Your spelling and grammar are great, your writing style terrific, and you made Zuko perfectly in-character.
Give yourself some ice cream, 'cause you deserve it! :D
| Kimberly T chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
This was quite well done! You really raise excellent points in this short piece. If even one person in the Earth Kingdom had seen Zuko as a firebender but still accepted him-if just one person had given him the HOPE that even Iroh had admitted Zuko would have to give himself instead-he might have made a different decision that day.
The only critique I can give is that it could have been expounded on a bit more. I would suggest adding a bit about what Zuko thought would eventually happen to him if he took the "choice" he thought his uncle was referring to and lived as a refugee from the war, denying his firebending, for the rest of his long life. Would he eventually go crackers from continually denying such an essential part of his being?
| notonffeveragain chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
Way to go! Getting your first story out there, it really is terrifying isn't it? Well you did great, writing and grammar all good. I like the story and you really squeezed the emotion out! All in all, awesome!